Awesome Autumn

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Awesome autumn and glorious golds, outstanding oranges and rufescent reds combine colors and quilts quiver as whispering winds and lamented leaves shower scenes and layer lands- profusely paint and gleamingly gift- blaze of autumn before winter pall. November 8, 2021 Contest: Alliterisen - 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Used Sequence #1 Syllables: 9 11 8 10 7 9 9 Checked with PS Syllable Counter

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/22/2021 10:15:00 AM

I am pretty behind on reading, so sorry this comment is late Sandra. Your poem is so beautiful. I love the way you describe “whispering winds and lamented leaves” You have given the wind and leaves a voice. This beauty is going into my faves! Congratulations on your very deserving first placement. I adore this season and your poem captures it so creatively. Have a wonderful Christmas Sandra. Blessings xxoo

Constance La France

Date: 11/30/2021 9:46:00 AM

Sandra, so beautifully penned, a truly lovely poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest, I really like the images used ~ love and serenity _Constance

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/29/2021 10:54:00 AM

well written and rewards given as a winner, Sandra.

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2021 7:10:00 AM

"Autumn's glorious golds and rufescent reds", Wonderful write Sandra, Congrats on your win

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/8/2021 2:05:00 PM

Beautifully written Sandra :)