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Away Up a Mountain

Away up a Mountain No stars I could see Only a dark fountain I saw flow near me! As the cliffs were so weak Fear started to spread Yet, I did reach the peak With goal went ahead! There came, then, the great slip My fall was awful There was pain in my hip I could just waffle! Why should I take such risk? I just could not tell Do I have a slipped disc? Is this hill or hell? Why should I blame the hill? The mistake was mine It's an adventure still Hence, now I feel fine...!

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Date: 7/31/2023 7:44:00 PM
Those mountains can be treacherous! Congrats on your top win, Christuraj! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/31/2023 9:14:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/31/2023 11:46:00 AM
You sure heal quick, Christuraj. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Date: 7/31/2023 7:36:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/31/2023 9:48:00 AM
Remember when you climb a hill, take with you a pain killing pill. Enjoyed this very much Cristuraji, congratulations on your win in Jan’s contest ~ Belle
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Date: 7/31/2023 7:36:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/31/2023 7:57:00 AM
Beautifully written Christuraj:-) Many congrats on your top placement and thanks for taking time to enter the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2023 7:35:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/21/2023 1:46:00 PM
This poem seems that you got hurt quite badly but but up you got and managed your fall as an adventure and in good spirit, Excellent poetry. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/21/2023 6:17:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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