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Away At the Dentist

Away at the dentist 
No relief all night
If he starts to hurt me
his hand I will bite

When I open my mouth
he says, "There it is.
You've got a cavity."
Well duh, Doc. Gee whiz

I'll need an injection
to handle the fill
My request was ignored
cause I hear the drill

This is taking too long
I think I might faint
This guy must be a quack
A dentist he ain't

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Kim Merryman Date: 7/31/2023 8:05:00 PM An entertaining write, Mark! Congrats on your top win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

Terry Flood Date: 7/31/2023 2:56:00 PM I sympathise, Mark. Recently I had a tooth that cracked and its filling came out. No pain whatsoever but the dentist said it had to come out, which gave me a toothache that lasted three weeks! Enjoyed this fun write. Congratulations. Terry Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 7/31/2023 8:16:00 AM I'm so delighted to see your name on this one Mark, I had been thinking of doing a dentist one myself:-) Many congrats on your top placement and thanks for taking time to enter the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/14/2023 1:56:00 PM Mark, very entertaining, well done. I am sure Jan will love it! Nice to see you on here, my friend. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/14/2023 1:55:00 PM very funny, mark! Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 7/14/2023 6:52:00 AM I'd say it's time to get out of that chair and find a new dentist. Jan's sure to love this one, Mark. It's great to see you posting, but it's not nearly often enough ;-) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2023 6:44:00 AM Oh I feel the pain! Had to have my first tooth extraction…thought it would be easy…what a nightmare…then waiting for my hubby and the insurance…finally calling to get the implant started…yup now have to go in for a consult first…sigh…hate it all…why do I have to be patient being a patient. Did I say I hate this…lol! Great write! Login to Reply