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Clouds gently caress Tips of the mountains slowly As they flow away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/25/2009 12:07:00 AM
Nice one Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
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Date: 11/24/2009 5:35:00 PM
Once again u amaze me with your lovely haiku .. just when I think I have read the most beautiful one .. u post another one more beautiful than before... lovely.. entered Raul's contest yet? this would be excellent entry... luv .. "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/24/2009 10:42:00 AM
Really nice, i never could figure out what a haiku was i guess now i know really good haiku. -ShAyLa-
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:24:00 AM
Living in S.L.C. I have seen that image more times than I can count.....A lovely one it is indeed......Great write.....:JP]
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:12:00 AM
great poem,
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Date: 11/24/2009 4:33:00 AM
Hi Sara, thanks for your comment on my Haiku, "Dawn" for the contest. I like your Haiku also, you seem to be very good at this form, I struggle a bit. I will be posting a new contest today called "Anything Goes. Looking out my window, I see fog rolling in great waves. Burrr.. glad to be inside....sipping cafe..
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