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Awash in Glory

Statuesque pines reach Upward in supplication Receive sunburst's light *Inspired by Raul's "Ascension" contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/22/2010 7:56:00 PM
Teresa, I cannot find any poems by you that I can comment on. No, I am not that Donna Golden. Golden is my married name. Thanks for your inquiry and good luck in your search.
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:51:00 AM
Very nice Haiku here Donna. Lite easy read with great flow....God Bless...Taz
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Date: 12/5/2009 8:52:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Donna and no one does visuals like u from your golden pen.. it has been on the top of the 50 hot poems for weeks now... well deserved... lovely... happy Sunday with blessings... and luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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Date: 12/4/2009 4:55:00 PM
Very elegant, just beautiful. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 12/4/2009 7:04:00 AM
Visually beautiful is the ideation, like a sculptured image in words. Love the verbal magic.
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Date: 12/2/2009 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations Donna ^____^ This is an excellent Haiku!
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:57:00 PM
Donna, many congratulations in your second place in Raul's contest >> James,x
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Date: 12/1/2009 6:51:00 PM
Lovely Donna. Congratulations on a worthy win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/28/2009 2:34:00 PM
love the last line of this piece. brilliantly penned. love and peace: james
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Date: 11/27/2009 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations Donna, on your 2nd place win in Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/27/2009 10:47:00 AM
Few words Green Gold'
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Date: 11/27/2009 8:56:00 AM
amazingly beautiful winner in Raul's contest! Donna! congrats! jimbo
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Date: 11/26/2009 11:46:00 PM
Donna thanks you for your kind words and comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/26/2009 8:11:00 PM
Skillful pen here Donna. I didn't even know supplication was a word but you define it for me here solely in the context of the pines growing and soaking in the sunlight, kind of like fulfilling their potential or something along those lines...Congradts on winning 2nd place! Also thanks for the other comment, it moved me in a way I'm not used to...never had a poem defined as 'multi-dimensional' before. It meant a lot to me:)
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Date: 11/26/2009 12:21:00 AM
Excellent wording!
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Date: 11/25/2009 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations Donna! You manage to capture the scene with these few words! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/25/2009 12:17:00 PM
congrats on the win!!
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Date: 11/25/2009 7:12:00 AM
Excellent presentation , Donna and well done , again ..
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Date: 11/24/2009 2:34:00 PM
Totally and completely love everything about your haiku. I like how you kind of used personification like the trees are in worship. Congratulations on your second place finish!
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Date: 11/24/2009 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place finish in Raul's contest! I liked this poem the first time I read it and can easily see why it was chosen. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen
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Date: 11/24/2009 12:24:00 PM
Donna, many congratulations on your win in Raul's contest >> James,x
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:50:00 AM
So beautiful, Donna!!! So inspired and decribes the whole feeling of this beautiful photo! Congratulations on your win!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:37:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Donna.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:31:00 AM
MAGNIFICENT HAIKU, Donna. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest and thank you for your kind comments. love Lainie
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Donna. Love, Carol
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