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Awash In Glory

Statuesque pines reach Upward in supplication Receive sunburst's light *Inspired by Raul's "Ascension" contest.

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Donna Golden

Date: 6/22/2010 7:56:00 PM

Teresa, I cannot find any poems by you that I can comment on. No, I am not that Donna Golden. Golden is my married name. Thanks for your inquiry and good luck in your search.

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/28/2009 3:51:00 AM

Very nice Haiku here Donna. Lite easy read with great flow....God Bless...Taz

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/5/2009 8:52:00 PM

Beautiful haiku Donna and no one does visuals like u from your golden pen.. it has been on the top of the 50 hot poems for weeks now... well deserved... lovely... happy Sunday with blessings... and luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/4/2009 4:55:00 PM

Very elegant, just beautiful. Love, Iolanda

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/4/2009 7:04:00 AM

Visually beautiful is the ideation, like a sculptured image in words. Love the verbal magic.

Gael Attal

Date: 12/2/2009 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations Donna ^____^ This is an excellent Haiku!

James Fraser

Date: 12/2/2009 1:57:00 PM

Donna, many congratulations in your second place in Raul's contest >> James,x

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2009 6:51:00 PM

Lovely Donna. Congratulations on a worthy win. Love, Joyce

James Faulkner

Date: 11/28/2009 2:34:00 PM

love the last line of this piece. brilliantly penned. love and peace: james

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations Donna, on your 2nd place win in Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

P P

Date: 11/27/2009 10:47:00 AM

Few words Green Gold'

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/27/2009 8:56:00 AM

amazingly beautiful winner in Raul's contest! Donna! congrats! jimbo

Brian Strand

Date: 11/26/2009 11:46:00 PM

Donna thanks you for your kind words and comments today.Rgds Brian

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 11/26/2009 8:11:00 PM

Skillful pen here Donna. I didn't even know supplication was a word but you define it for me here solely in the context of the pines growing and soaking in the sunlight, kind of like fulfilling their potential or something along those lines...Congradts on winning 2nd place! Also thanks for the other comment, it moved me in a way I'm not used to...never had a poem defined as 'multi-dimensional' before. It meant a lot to me:)

Courtney Dyer

Date: 11/26/2009 12:21:00 AM

Excellent wording!

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 7:05:00 PM

Congratulations Donna! You manage to capture the scene with these few words! Peace and love, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/25/2009 12:17:00 PM

congrats on the win!!

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/25/2009 7:12:00 AM

Excellent presentation , Donna and well done , again ..

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/24/2009 2:34:00 PM

Totally and completely love everything about your haiku. I like how you kind of used personification like the trees are in worship. Congratulations on your second place finish!

Date: 11/24/2009 1:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your second place finish in Raul's contest! I liked this poem the first time I read it and can easily see why it was chosen. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 11/24/2009 12:24:00 PM

Donna, many congratulations on your win in Raul's contest >> James,x