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We cannot often enough smoothens out our edges rough, down to the subtlest layer, in gentle, mindful prayer. Continuous correction steers consciousness direction, aligned with the throb of love, as tidings of God’s peace dove. To this end, our will we bend, that we may here now ascend, transmuting form as God’s light, bliss ensconced, to heart’s delight. Each breath grants to us a chance to make erect our stooped stance, sidestepping ego borne ruse, doable if we so choose. 20-September-2022

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Date: 9/20/2022 8:41:00 AM
Important to be aware of self. Well written too. Hope you will like my flight in the air.
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Date: 9/20/2022 8:10:00 PM
Indeed ~ a mindfulness continuum

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