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Awareness of Sinfulness

When words upset you, you lose your childhood
It's dreadful to grasp that life is idyllic nearby
 
The youth have drawn, and no path forward
Grey hair has arisen, where is my getaway?

Eagerly flee what's in your nakedness
Spot your own hidden vices and weep
 
Also, cognize your sins before the final count
What you willfully did must be called to keep
 
The gatekeeper points are futile if ignored
Now we agnize that whiles aren't deceiving

 Undeniably, the soul within is mysterious
You will sway it despite its advancing

You yearn for the moral hubris of your stance
Its fading thrill is its final track lodging


Written: March 14, 2022

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Vijay Pandit March 15, 2022 at 5:09 AM Great advice and introspection in this poem, Lasaad. Your insightful words resonate.

Valsa George March 14, 2022 at 9:15 PM 'Eagerly flee what's in your nakedness Spot your own hidden vices and weep' These lines summarize the crux of your poem. It is high time to make an introspection into ourselves and see for ourselves our shortcomings and vices! Repent over them and try to rectify them . A beautiful message, dear Lasaad !

Judy Ball March 14, 2022 at 7:02 PM This is so well written and such a good message for those who read it. It's hard or us to recognize and accept our own faults though we readily see them in others. If we cannot admit our faults and mistakes we cannot be forgiven for that which we have not asked forgiveness for. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB