Awareness of Sinfulness

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When words upset you, you lose your childhood It's dreadful to grasp that life is idyllic nearby The youth have drawn, and no path forward Grey hair has arisen, where is my getaway? Eagerly flee what's in your nakedness Spot your own hidden vices and weep Also, cognize your sins before the final count What you willfully did must be called to keep The gatekeeper points are futile if ignored Now we agnize that whiles aren't deceiving Undeniably, the soul within is mysterious You will sway it despite its advancing You yearn for the moral hubris of your stance Its fading thrill is its final track lodging Written: March 14, 2022

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/15/2022 5:09:00 AM

Great advice and introspection in this poem, Lasaad. Your insightful words resonate.

Valsa George

Date: 3/14/2022 9:15:00 PM

'Eagerly flee what's in your nakedness Spot your own hidden vices and weep' These lines summarize the crux of your poem. It is high time to make an introspection into ourselves and see for ourselves our shortcomings and vices! Repent over them and try to rectify them . A beautiful message, dear Lasaad !

Judy Ball

Date: 3/14/2022 7:02:00 PM

This is so well written and such a good message for those who read it. It's hard or us to recognize and accept our own faults though we readily see them in others. If we cannot admit our faults and mistakes we cannot be forgiven for that which we have not asked forgiveness for. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB