Awakenings

Promises of the spring's sweet pleasures
                                 arrive with the first soft breezes.
                                   Fragrance permeates fresh air.
                                      Urgent love signals sent 
                                            to awaking world.
                                             Pretty blossoms
                                                flutter down
                                                   with a
                                                     kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing 1st in Brian's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Ebbs Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 11:11 PM
Congrats, this is sweet :-)
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 7:30 PM
The sweet taste of victory..Congrats on your win..I share your sorry at the loss of your brother..Sara
Beadnall Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 2:36 PM
Congratulations with this winner,Joyce,blessings from Paul.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win with Awakenings... excellent my friend..luv..
Guzzi Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Brian's choice picks are very uplifting this morn thank you Joyce and God Bless. Congrad's Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Joyce, the shapes exceptional, and the poetry is just delightful. I wish you well in Michael's contest with this GEM.....:)
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 12:11 PM
A lovely image of the blossom floating down to bestow a kiss, Joyce. Wishing you success in the contest with this delightful nonet! Love, Carolyn (Spent the entire day fishing yesterday and it was wonderful. Hope you are enjoying the weekend too!)
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 11:06 PM
Sweet blossom of spring!! That kiss!
Roberts Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 9:27 AM
lovely nonet Joyce, good luck in the contest
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