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Awakening

Shower a life source Sprinkle love, remove despair Clean slate, start anew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/28/2018 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful poem...words are perfectly made together
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Date: 5/24/2017 12:44:00 PM
Yours are wise words, Carol. Love is the 'food' of life! ~ Regards // paul
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Carol B.
Date: 5/24/2017 3:30:00 PM
I am so pleased that you like the haiku. :)
Date: 5/23/2017 1:28:00 PM
- A wonderful haiku, Carol - Your first !!! ... woww! - I love haiku poems, fun to write :) - A big 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol B.
Date: 5/24/2017 3:31:00 PM
Yes my very first attempt :) Thanks so much for the wonderful comment!
Date: 5/22/2017 6:17:00 PM
Wonderful message, Carol B!!! All of spring is such a welcome awakening.
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Carol B.
Date: 5/24/2017 3:32:00 PM
Andrea, It sure can make me feel alive :)
Date: 5/22/2017 5:10:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..You have got the syllable count correct..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Carol B.
Date: 5/24/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara :)
Date: 5/22/2017 1:44:00 PM
Oh, I love your haiku Carol :) Wonderful for a first attempt!
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Carol B.
Date: 5/22/2017 1:59:00 PM
Darren thanks! Hugs :)
Date: 5/22/2017 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Carol! Thank you for commenting on my poem I very honored ~*
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Carol B.
Date: 5/22/2017 12:55:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment Eve. I adored your sonnet.
Date: 5/22/2017 7:18:00 AM
A beautiful message in a wonderful Haiku. Very well done for your first attempt, actually perfectly done for you first attempt.
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Carol B.
Date: 5/22/2017 11:43:00 AM
Chris, Thanks for the compliment. I almost didn't post it for fear it would be a flop. :)
Date: 5/21/2017 8:57:00 PM
Excellent first attempt at an haiku. I really like this write. Going to fav your very first haiku. It provokes thought.
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Carol B.
Date: 5/21/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thanks so much for the fav and the vote of confidence. :)