Awakening

A distant sound,
noise. 
Detached.
Increasing, unrelenting, overwhelming,  
piercing, and painful.
Destroy it.

I stir inside a body not my own,
groping to find the roping of its limbs, 
my body is possessed, 
with a drunken soul and
I drown in a black whirlpool of emotion.
I punch the noise, 
and end the pain.
Now rise and 
walk !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Farmer Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 1:18 PM
This is what I feel in the morning when the alarm goes off!
Gigno Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 2:37 AM
!!!
Farmer Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 1:19 PM
This is what I feel in the morning when the alarm goes off!
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