Awakening

crystal clear raindrops gently peck the windowpane my eyes pop open May 17, 2021

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Dan Prizner

Date: 5/19/2021 3:13:00 PM

looking at your poems this one is so vivid I like poetry about ordinary things often overlooked in our every day busy life Thank you this one

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/19/2021 5:40:00 PM

Thank you, Dan. Generally my aching knees waken me first when a rainy front comes through. But, I did awaken to the peck of drops on the panes the other morning. Thanks, Dan, for your read and your comment.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/17/2021 1:37:00 PM

This is a lovely Haiku, great imagery; I enjoyed reading it.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/17/2021 7:03:00 PM

Thanks so much, Lasaad.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 5/17/2021 12:56:00 PM

that was a great haiku.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/17/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thanks, Nancy. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2021 10:50:00 AM

What a lovely way to wake up, Milton! Enjoyed your lovely haiku. Best wishes, Carolyn

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/17/2021 11:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, Carolyn. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.