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The sun's flirtatious wink woke me at dawn I smiled, lazily stretched, and stifled a yawn I was teased by the touch of his warm hand The power of his refulgent torch, I understand His golden majesty then rose to brighten the skies greeting the morning in such a grandiose reprise

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Date: 7/4/2025 8:11:00 AM
Kin, sounds like getting up in a good mood when looking at it this way. Hope you are well and sending smiles. It's much better to have this attitude and welcoming every day as a gift!!
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Date: 7/1/2025 1:54:00 PM
Such a sun touched , warm , feel good write Lin! Wish l could wake up to that every morning Ha! Debx
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Date: 7/1/2025 7:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your work. Creative and well thought out. Thanks for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 7/1/2025 7:58:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Sara.
Date: 7/1/2025 7:43:00 AM
wonderful personification Lin!! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/1/2025 7:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan.

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