Awakened

Awakened by the Whip-Poor-Will
Then the cooing of the gray Dove
Spring's sun shining _call of Bluegill
The Oak doesn't call though my precious Love

His love's infallibility
Lift's me in times of trouble and strife
Through all predictability
Of His love like tunes of fife

His great reliability
Lifts me in all of life's great storms
For it's sustainability
Keeps my awesome spiritual being warm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 1:12 PM
I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Glistening Thoughts" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:58 PM
awe-struck, sara.. congrats on your well deserved win.. a fav!..:) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:56 PM
congrats Sara on a special and splendid win for exceptional poetry of glistening thoughts luv..
Johnson Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:25 PM
Such shining faith Sara. A great win. Love, Joyce
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Sara. Blessings, Connie
Burch Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 11:14 PM
Congratulations on your win Sara!!! Isn't it wonderful living in the woods!! I heard the Hoot owls last night...I have a pair here at my place...raising babies...big huggsss my friend,love~deb
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March 25, 2012 at 7:40 PM
lovely rhyme Sara! a gentle yet powerful awakening sound..
Culverhouse Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 7:23 PM
enjoyed reading today....the mighty oaks the deer didn't eat the acorns this year and those little things are buried every where....trying to grow.
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 5:46 PM
I bet this is for the spiritual contest. LOVELY and uplifting, just as Jack said below.
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 4:42 PM
Love this beautiful and uplifting piece, my friend.
Onclaud Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 2:14 PM
sara, the spirit of your language radiates!.. a soulful write for rick?.. winning bet for me..:) huggs!
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March 17, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Awakened indeed,,A beautiful story poem nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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March 17, 2012 at 12:51 PM
A very enjoyable read thank you Sara , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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