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Awake From Slumber

AWAKE FROM SLUMBER Awake from slumber, Rip’s somber number* Samples of sweet sunshine and robin’s song Duo of dawn’s serendipitous Spring Touch my skin with mirth Witch-hazel sun of earth Sweet foliage of harmony, the scented Honeysuckle, pretty petals of rose Moss glows with newfound light Cerulean sheaf takes flight 3/19/2017
*For it feels like Winter never ends Rip Van Winkle slept for 20 years

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Date: 3/27/2017 5:47:00 AM
'Moss glows with newfound light. Wonderful. Congratulations, Kai
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2017 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 3/26/2017 12:53:00 PM
Clever ideas creatively put to words, Kim. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 3/26/2017 11:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/26/2017 4:59:00 AM
Congrats Kim, for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy!
Date: 3/25/2017 9:08:00 PM
A lovely, creative piece, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2017 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Blessings xx
Date: 3/25/2017 7:54:00 PM
This is really beautiful, Kim. Also clever with the words and imagery. Congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! xx

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