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somnambulists'creed the moon is in their pocket dreams - reality

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/15/2010 3:11:00 PM
Iolanda , returning to this poem because it was about dreams!! I had to tell you that your dream is the same one I wrote about for that contest on the human mind. My assignment was "lost in dreams" and your comment to my blog really reminded me of MY dream. If you ever see mine, let me know if it was like yours! Luv, andrea ps thanks for reading my bog!
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Date: 4/15/2010 2:54:00 PM
Wonderful Iolanda...good luck if for Gareth's contest .. a brilliant Haiku my friend.. I am also running my "Shining Star" contest .. and please check out my new blog Poetry Poll today...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/13/2010 11:01:00 PM
A very meaningful haiku
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Date: 4/13/2010 1:07:00 PM
Excellent capture, Iolanda...your words performed their intent!...Peace, audrey
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Date: 4/13/2010 12:18:00 PM
Wow, I think you did very well with this one. Me likes! (Inspired by arizona desert?) LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/13/2010 6:40:00 AM
Nice one!
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Date: 4/13/2010 5:11:00 AM
I had to look up the first word, and yes, yes, walking in dreams, what a beautiful haiku, as a matter of fact I somnambulate in my dreams, every night.. love Constance
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