Awake

somnambulists'creed the moon is in their pocket dreams - reality

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2010 3:11:00 PM

Iolanda , returning to this poem because it was about dreams!! I had to tell you that your dream is the same one I wrote about for that contest on the human mind. My assignment was "lost in dreams" and your comment to my blog really reminded me of MY dream. If you ever see mine, let me know if it was like yours! Luv, andrea ps thanks for reading my bog!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2010 2:54:00 PM

Wonderful Iolanda...good luck if for Gareth's contest .. a brilliant Haiku my friend.. I am also running my "Shining Star" contest .. and please check out my new blog Poetry Poll today...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/13/2010 11:01:00 PM

A very meaningful haiku

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/13/2010 1:07:00 PM

Excellent capture, Iolanda...your words performed their intent!...Peace, audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2010 12:18:00 PM

Wow, I think you did very well with this one. Me likes! (Inspired by arizona desert?) LUv, andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2010 6:40:00 AM

Nice one!

Constance La France

Date: 4/13/2010 5:11:00 AM

I had to look up the first word, and yes, yes, walking in dreams, what a beautiful haiku, as a matter of fact I somnambulate in my dreams, every night.. love Constance