Awaiting the Title From a Friend

She is, like seasons of my beautiful land
Smiles of spring, rain drops of winter
Impish of summer and giddy of autumn
Like a swift river her laughter echoes 
Like a dawning sun shining on forehead
Smile spreading like the crescent moon
Like the chimes of tubular bells on pane
Changing in moods, in colors like rainbow
Mischievous eyes, little kiddish; little mature
Cute Aquiline nose, a charming grace.
Winsome lips encasing heartfelt smile
Night woven in the flowing hair locks
A blessed hand with a artistic wand
Limit by my vision I leave my pen
To sleep in the intoxication of verses
Just met her on a canvas of art world
In humility, in grace, in empathy of love
With two little angles in her blossom 
Compassionate soul mate, loving friends
World in a page, far and near in facebook
She nurtures every smile with smile
Just that I pray to my Lord the Merciful
Take care of my friend, in every path
May His blessing be on Mustafa, my Guide
For this blessing is His mercy I cherish
The friendship of the smiling eyes..

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inspired by a picture of a friend, just my imagination ran wild with pen in hand in thought of 1 meething i had with her, little hi! and little bye.. a smile and 'glad to meet you'..
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please review..

regards
.musafirs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/11/2012 10:04:00 PM
AZIM, A GREAT INSPIRATION AND ~great verse... thank you for your awesome poem ;-) have yourself a good night~ Always*PD
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Azim Mohammed
Date: 3/11/2012 11:52:00 PM
dear Destroyer poet, Thank you for encouraging comments, have a nice time regards
Date: 3/11/2012 7:44:00 AM
It is a beautiful "friendship" poem....alot of love and care. Enjoy to read it! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/11/2012 11:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne, for beautiful comment, it encouraging. have a lovely time regards
Date: 3/11/2012 7:40:00 AM
nice work
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Azim Mohammed
Date: 3/12/2012 12:06:00 AM
Thank you Kenisha, appreciate you reading, & comment. Have a wonderfulday regards
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