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Awaiting The Sun

beyond distant hills where the lake meets with the sky I wait all alone for Raul's Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/13/2012 10:05:00 PM
Good evening Michael, Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:57:00 AM
I could almost feel that I am also there...waiting for the sun on my own--thanks for sharing this, Michael...
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Date: 2/19/2010 5:17:00 PM
Very nice Haiku...enjoyed....good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 2/19/2010 2:22:00 PM
What a beauty, Hope the sun shines bright on you and yours..Charma
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Date: 2/19/2010 1:54:00 PM
The lonliness comes through this poem with power. Wow! This has impact. Good luck in the contest. Hope things are going well with you. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 2/19/2010 1:42:00 PM
Michael, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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