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Awaiting the Ebb Tide

She chose to think his sweet talk lies were cute… that things he said had value worth pursuit. that substance would emerge, somewhat astute. And while his words of love she wants to feel… she ambles through their world hoping to heal. She fears his selfish frost is hard as steel. These past three years recalled with misty eyes… he goads her daily even as she cries; he begs excuse but sneers with compromise. His conversation scars with bogus blame. it mocks them both for trust has turned to shame; it gags her voice, so silence is her game. She made a promise, hoping that somehow her mate would change. She’ll never break her vow.

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Date: 10/1/2024 7:17:00 AM
Reason, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, lovely poem, Constance
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Date: 9/20/2024 8:27:00 AM
I've read your winning work and am delighted to see it in the list of honor. Way to go. Congratulations. Unless the person seeks out a way to change, they won't change. Sara K
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Date: 9/20/2024 10:53:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. I welcome your supportive comment and agreement with the theme of my piece. This is not personal in honor of my husband who was the very best I could have wanted. Have a great weekend.
Date: 9/16/2024 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your write/story. Hope this is just a write/not true. Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Date: 9/16/2024 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. This is NOT just a write but it is NOT personal for me, My husband was the very best I could ever have dreamed. Unfortunately, I have known many couples whose relationship is not so loving, not submissive as the scriptures suggest husbands and wives should live. Usually they give up and divorce and sometimes it is called for. I appreciate your comment.

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