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Awaiting Spring

The Woolly Mammoth finally groaned his last As the North Pole’s shift encased him in ice The first to succumb to an Arctic blast And now we humans challenge winter’s price Beneath the snowy pasture, stems break through Crocuses, daffodils, tulips emerge They’re certain that spring will arrive on queue Warm weather awaits; we are on the verge The coming months will dapple the landscape Kisses of lavender, yellow and red Will find you quite soon; there is no escape Bid farewell to those frozen days you dread Keep focused on the magic of springtime When sweaters are shed and the blooms surround The chirps of spring birds have begun to chime The glory of nature will soon abound *For Francine’s “Winter Begone” contest January 20, 2013

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Date: 1/9/2014 10:46:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn for your kind words. Yes there is lot of chaos but a new ray of hope has recenly came up in India in the form of a newly formed AAP party. The People's AAP party has created a big challanage for all the old national parties to change their way of working and solving the problems of people. I remember one of your Poem in which you had raised a voice against the problems of US citizens in one of your great Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:44:00 PM
What a refreshing Poem you have created Carolyn with the warmth of THE awakening Spring, which always gives new hopes and colors not only to cold and shivering earth, but to every new born flowers, birds and even animals while filling the humans with a new look towards Nature. Thanks for this lovely write and for your precious words on my Independence Day Poem. I am mentioning my comments on that Poem in the next comments ( I am writing this comment from a lap top as I am not in Kanpur Please execuxe me if you find any error).....Continue on next...Ravindra K kAPOOR
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Date: 6/13/2013 9:55:00 AM
Unique and creative work..I believe that the fire breathing dragon has arrived with summer sun..Enjoyed reading this morn..Soup Mail Soon..Sara
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Date: 6/13/2013 9:55:00 AM
No soup mail emblem so no soup mail soon..Sara
Date: 2/28/2013 12:58:00 PM
Hey carolyn i to am waiting for spring nice write ..Keep shareing
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Date: 2/13/2013 12:58:00 AM
Just returning to this spring write of yours Carolyn, and also to wish you a happy Valentines day..!!!
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Date: 2/6/2013 11:54:00 AM
Heartiest congrats on your poem's well deserved win in the Contest of Francine Roberts. -Mohammad
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:34:00 PM
Hi Carolyn I loved how you put history in this one! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:30:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read, Carolyn! Congratulations on a deserving win! Much love, Annalise
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:56:00 AM
It is so wonderful to see you posting your beautiful poetry again, Carolyn. This is an example of what we have been missing! Thank you for all your past kindnesses, and don't think that we have forgotten you. Hope you are doing better. Congratulations once again!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:16:00 AM
Hi there, missed you about but this is lovely and well deserving of a win xx
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Date: 2/4/2013 2:06:00 AM
Very pretty Caroline. So nice to find you here. Hope you come back often. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:45:00 AM
Carolyn ! Congratulations on your win with this lovely piece!!! I've missed you :) welcome back! Big hugs. Love you bunches. Deb
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations! Connie
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:16:00 PM
many congrats on your winning entry Carolyn, hope all is well with you, thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 2/1/2013 5:15:00 AM
oh the joy of seeing you back again.. and your poetry never fails to inspire as does this gem..
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Date: 1/30/2013 10:20:00 PM
I love this one, Carolyn. You really fit the theme of Winter Begone! Great imagery.
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Date: 1/30/2013 10:21:00 AM
Your eloquent words have given me fresh hope. Big love, daver
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Date: 1/24/2013 1:43:00 PM
I am so glad to read a new poem from you Carolyn.An amazing poem from you.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 1/24/2013 1:41:00 PM
Yessssss!!!!!
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Date: 1/20/2013 7:24:00 PM
So nice to have you back with us and with such a nice poem. I too am ready for spring and we have had nice weather the entire winter. I actually turned on the air for a short while a couple of days ago.
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Date: 1/20/2013 5:02:00 PM
It is so lovely to see you are back !!! I hope you are back to stay awhile, dear Carolyn. We have missed you and your poetry! And you haven't lost your touch!!
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Date: 1/20/2013 3:33:00 PM
I have found my long lost friend....(So Happy) - I hope all is well!!!Love your poem.....great imagery - a moment long ago brought forth today.I can see the scapeand feel the chill- longing///waiting///Soon - God bless -^Rick
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Date: 1/20/2013 2:53:00 PM
Well this has picked up my spirits a bit Carolyn; we have had a few days of snow here, and I'm feeling a bit cooped up wishing you top placing in the contest.." Thinking of you..!
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Date: 1/20/2013 1:14:00 PM
Carolyn, so nice to see you! :) <3 - And thanks for your lovely poem, I love spring. - (Here it is snow and winter.)- Luck in contest ! - Hope you are doing well, take care of yourself. - oxox / / love from Anne-Lise :)
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