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Awaiting Deathly Veil

In drained stare Manacled and bare Vixens two Deadened despair Their victim sits Punctured and pale As a last tear falls Awaiting deathly veil Living becomes ashen Her pertness fails Their darkness glee's Her soul now sails Blue black dark Now haunts her eyes These naked vixens Shrieking cries A body once lived Her spirits now flown Another life awaits Beside the dark ones throne http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dark-3.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/11/2010 1:38:00 PM
You know what I love about poetry is that we can all have such different styles, yet each has the capacity to have such a profound effect. Excellent write, dark and intense. Great title too ~ Sharon - thanks a million for all your great comments :)
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:33:00 AM
wowowoowowowo James thats my type of poem love it Sarah x
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:59:00 PM
Very intense,a journey into darkness,with light at the end of the tunnel,hope for the throne. .James I need to find time to read your other gems.Your verses always touch me deep in a way or another. .Celene
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Date: 6/9/2010 7:01:00 PM
A nice reflections on life and death
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Date: 6/9/2010 5:35:00 PM
Kinda scary here...Especially last two lines ....That would be enough to make one turn around...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2010 3:34:00 PM
Oh, quite a trip to the underworld, James. And these vixens can wear many disguises to lure their victims to eternal damnation. Very intense, well-written poetry! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2010 3:21:00 PM
" Dark" and dramatic.. loved it. BG
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Date: 6/9/2010 2:28:00 PM
James, I loved this poem. the rhyme and flow worked very well together and the story was mystic, great job, Yf4L, God Bless, mj
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