Raul Moreno Poet Choka

Awaiting Dawn

The heat of today,
Shall vanish, as the day ends;
Coolness shall return.
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Coolness shall return,
On shoulders of tomorrow:
While night exhales dawn.
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While night exhales dawn,
Breath on invisible wings;
Discharges fresh air.
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Discharges fresh air,
The lungs of the forest breathes;
Scorching regions praise.
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Scorching regions praise,
The arrival of coolness,
Their faith awaits dawn.

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Krista Kurth July 21, 2009 at 11:39 AM This poem captures just what I have been feeling as the heat of the day gives way to a welcome evening coolness! I always enjoy reading and experiencing your poems. Krista

Jayne Eggins July 10, 2009 at 11:12 AM A new favourite of mine Loved it ... Jayne x

C. E. Mcmullin June 29, 2009 at 4:21 PM Absolutely- Kudos, Poet!! poet butterfly

Brian Strand June 29, 2009 at 8:22 AM Quite beautiful Raul.One to re-read in my favourites Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Charmaine Chircop June 29, 2009 at 3:30 AM your friend Ruben here below left me breathless:) and so did this poem---heat of the day-coolness to follow,night exhales dawn,their faith awaits dawn-their beautiful dawn--your writes are magic-you aren't just a master of Haikus ,you 're the king of all----charma

James Marshall Goff June 28, 2009 at 9:20 PM truly beautiful, Raul, jim

Misty Penton-Leccese June 28, 2009 at 8:32 PM I love this one. It's going to my favs. You have painted a Beautiful picture. Keep up the wonderful writing. Lots of Love, Misty

Carrie Richards June 28, 2009 at 4:28 PM Breathtaking and beautiful, and just what I needed today. It is scorching here...and yes..you did remind me that the coolness shall return! Lovely lovely, choka!!

Carolyn Devonshire June 28, 2009 at 2:45 PM Very nice choka, Raul. You have a gift for painting images of naure.

James Fraser June 28, 2009 at 2:05 PM Raul, where did you find the inspiration behind this classic write, Wow - you have asceneded higher in my eyes now. Your poems are always presented with dressage, uniformity and the pristine look of a soldier on parade>>James