Avalanche

Avalanche 

Avalanched blizzards' cold dustings 
           envelope: 
 forests, gulleys, hillsides--
intentionally juxtaposing life...
 making necrose obstacles 
   painstakingly quiver,
      releasing Snow!
             Tons!
Ubiquitous vagabond-wielding
        Xenophobics'... Yielding Zone!




©deborah burch
3/27/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 29, 2012 at 8:57 AM
congrats on your placement
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement Deborah. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 1:02 AM
Excellent Deborah, a worthy winner xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 10:32 PM
awesome poem and win. Big congrats for you!!!!
Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 3:11 PM
You certainly put your amazing vocabulary to use in this extraordinary poem, Deborah. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 2:17 PM
A super write with this challenging form. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 1:39 PM
congrats Deborah on a great big win for this wonderful write in ABC on snow luv.. enjoy..
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 1:15 PM
Excellent use of words for this contest Susan and I am so happy to see it recognized as a winner. Congratulations!
Cornwall Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Whole alphabet used and done very well..XOXO Patrick
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