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Avalanche

The winter's snow The blinding swirl The empty passage The winding trail The bitter end My last prAyer V A L A N C H E...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2009 4:44:00 PM
I like the creative format of this poem for a nice visual effect. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/30/2009 7:38:00 PM
Steven, that was great...look forward to reading more of your work..BG
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Date: 1/30/2009 6:12:00 PM
Great poem and welcome to poetry soup..........................Danielle
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Date: 1/30/2009 2:22:00 PM
Very cool, Steven. I enjoyed the bleak subject matter created around a wonderful visual. Welcome to the Soup. Peace always, John
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Date: 1/30/2009 1:29:00 PM
Oh I really like that! good description, words chosen well! Welcome to the soup!! ~Jen~
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