Stephen Spinter Poet Free verse

Avalanche

The winter's snow
 The blinding swirl
  The empty passage
   The winding trail 
    The bitter end
     My last prAyer
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January 31, 2009 at 4:44 PM I like the creative format of this poem for a nice visual effect. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Barbara Gorelick January 30, 2009 at 7:38 PM Steven, that was great...look forward to reading more of your work..BG

Danielle Moreno January 30, 2009 at 6:12 PM Great poem and welcome to poetry soup..........................Danielle

John Heck January 30, 2009 at 2:22 PM Very cool, Steven. I enjoyed the bleak subject matter created around a wonderful visual. Welcome to the Soup. Peace always, John

Jen H. January 30, 2009 at 1:29 PM Oh I really like that! good description, words chosen well! Welcome to the soup!! ~Jen~