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Autumn's Treadmill

Light is fading It’s cold, abrasive Facing longer nights Green leaves mellow Brown and yellow Autumn has arrived Misty mornings Clock alarming Body sense awry Feel so jaded Last night’s raving Flashing through your mind Drink hot coffee Rush to catch the Seven thirty-five On the treadmill Routine, thankful Work keeps hope alive Simply crazy when, every now and then You want to bash your head against the wall No longer feeling worth it all Like you always thought you would You live the life you choose Or are you being used? Now faking it, doesn’t raise a hit You forfeit all or run with it Lucky to be paid And maybe later, dream of getting laid Light is fading It’s cold, abrasive Facing longer nights Green leaves mellow Brown and yellow Autumn has arrived

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Date: 3/6/2014 7:26:00 PM
hey hey ..this is a terrific poem..i truly enjoyed yur talent :)
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Date: 2/13/2014 9:12:00 AM
Some well expressed thoughts here, however, it's a shame you changed the format of stanza 4. It tends to halt the flow.
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Patricia L Graham
Date: 2/13/2014 9:25:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Mike. In lyrical terms it is musically known as a bridge so necessary to that format break for the tune in my head.
Date: 2/1/2014 4:08:00 AM
I loved the poem. Thanks for sharing .
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Patricia L Graham
Date: 2/1/2014 12:03:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know Darren. Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 1/14/2014 8:32:00 AM
I like this treadmill very much Patricia, Epicly enough, I have my own trail to walk in the evening. Patricia, a nice little welcome to the imagery of Autumn.... xox..Linda
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Patricia L Graham
Date: 1/15/2014 8:59:00 AM
Thanks PD, still finding my way around this awesome site.

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