sara Etgen-Baker Poet Haibun

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AUTUMN'S SYMPHONY

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A pumpkin-colored sun filled the autumn air, casting bright rays that warmed the vibrant red-gold leaves. What would the red-gold leaves be without this blessed light? And the autumn breeze? It came as a symphony, filled with warm love notes from the summer days gone by.

October's brisk wind
dissonant wind chimes blowing
autumn's symphony

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Valsa George October 3, 2025 at 10:40 PM Your haibuns always speak aloud. The wind chimes, the autumn wind and the red gold leaves together sing a sweet symphony. Greatly enjoyed. sara Etgen-Baker October 6, 2025 at 4:06 PM thank you, Valsa. You're so thoughtful and kind...glad you enjoyed this poem, hugs, Sara

Mickey Grubb October 3, 2025 at 10:30 AM Sara, this feels like autumn thinking out loud--warm, wistful, and musically alive. Your haiku’s shift to dissonance is a brilliant move. Soundly impressive, my friend. sara Etgen-Baker October 6, 2025 at 4:06 PM wow, thank you for your insight, Mickey, into the 'shift.' color me grateful for your visit and comments

Paige Hind October 3, 2025 at 9:37 AM Lovely, "works" :) sara Etgen-Baker October 6, 2025 at 4:05 PM awww, thank you, Paige :-)

Line Gauthier October 3, 2025 at 6:34 AM You paint a lovely picture, Sara ~ sara Etgen-Baker October 6, 2025 at 4:05 PM many thanks, Line