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Autumn's Splendors (Tanka)

Crab-apple trees; flush As the autumn hues ripen Oak and maple leaves Coloured red, gold, and orange… Gently fall -- covers the earth Tanka Tanka is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku with five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables. (5, 7, 5, 7, 7) The 5/7/5/7/7 rule is rumored to have been made up for school children to understand and learn this type of poetry.

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Date: 10/3/2008 3:37:00 PM
picturesque write, that gives one a vision of what is ahead, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/3/2008 3:11:00 PM
So wonderfully vivid and alive. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 10/1/2008 6:42:00 PM
Adell this is a wonderful Tanka it looks like winner to me I love it . Great imagery!!! Laura :) Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/1/2008 3:21:00 PM
Wonderful Adell! Changing season captured so beautifully. When it comes to crab-apples I think of the jelly which is absolutely out of this world deeeelish! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/1/2008 2:46:00 PM
Hi Adell - Excellent Tanka and interesting facts at the bottom that I never knew - I had three teeth cut out today - I'm in the process of getting me a new grill so I'll be able to smile again - God Bless
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