Autumn's Promise

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Author's Notes: This poem, "Autumn's Promise," is written in Blank Verse format and is set in "unrhymed" Iambic Pentameter (IP). This poems touches on the theme of love and its compelling aspect on a couple as they walk together kissing and caressing one another and pledging their love again to each other in a very special moment during the autumn season. I originally wrote this poem on August 28, 2015. (Gary Bateman - September 20, 2015) (Blank Verse)

Categories: allegory, autumn, emotions, feelings, i love you, inspiration, and love.

Blank Verse Notes:

Meter: IP / Verses: 10 / Words: 72

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Autumn’s Promise Autumn’s promise of love compels us true, As we walk in this magical moment. This change of seasons reflects Nature’s will, As the trees shed their leaves freely and the Afternoon wind’s protean emotions— Touch ever gently our bodies with their Cool-warm breath as we hug ‘n kiss deeply, In this passionate moment of true love. ‘Tis this very moment we cry out our Pledge to love one another forever! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (August 28, 2015) (Blank Verse)

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Sharon Gulley

Date: 10/19/2015 1:51:00 PM

A very lovely Autumn poem Gary. I like this one.....Sharon

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/20/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thanks Sharon!! This "Blank Verse" write did turn out very well. (I have so many other forms to experiment with, but it takes time as you know, to get to them.) Continued Best Wishes . . . Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/20/2015 3:11:00 PM

its enchanting autumn beautifully gary excellent pen pal

Gary Bateman
Date: 9/20/2015 3:15:00 PM

Thanks Liam Mate!! What can I say?? Autumn is that special season for love renewal and commitment. Cheers and Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/20/2015 11:15:00 AM

Hi G!Very beautifully romantic sweet love piece you've painted here my dear friend Gary.A very wonderful love poem filled of so much true love and devotion.Great Blank Verse in content and form!Just awesome!I truly enjoyed it.Excellent!Golden pen!A 7 +! A fav!:)Very nice to see you back in the soup today, G.And I really hope that all is well with you these days.Sending love n' prayers to you and Ingrid.Take good care of each other now:)All the best to you too always, G!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)D.

Gary Bateman
Date: 9/20/2015 2:41:00 PM

Hello "D" -- Thanks as always for your wonderful comments and for the 7 + FAV!! I've been away for a short while (as you know) work on other projects and short stories for my second book. I will try to get over your way to take a peek at your poems. Continued best wishes Dear "D" from Ingrid and me!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2015 9:29:00 AM

lovely imagery a beautiful romantic write Gary:-) hugs jan xx

Gary Bateman
Date: 9/20/2015 2:39:00 PM

Hello Jan, Thanks for your comment and read here. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. (I've been away for a short while from Poetry Soup working on "short stories" for my planned second book, in addition to poetry, of course!!) I have a number of dark themes planned for October and All Hallows' Eve!! Continued best wishes . . . Gary