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Autumns Pause

Scorched leaves drift to earth Gently in the evening sun Silence permeates

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Skat A

Date: 10/26/2015 9:45:00 PM

Laura, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Laura Owens
Date: 10/26/2015 9:48:00 PM

Hi Skat, I am an artist, herbalist, and writer/poet. I have been writing poems and stories forever. I love Haiku as a form of expression of what I see, hear, feel, and smell. Thank you for your warm welcome.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2015 8:26:00 PM

That is a good idea Laura, I once enjoyed writing the haiku, then I was told I was doing them all wrong. So, now I just enjoy the haiku of others. Well I better go see if you have another to share. LINDA

Laura Owens
Date: 10/26/2015 8:30:00 PM

There are lots of rules, but if you just stick to the basic's: First line 5 syllables, second line 7 syllables, third line 5 syllables. And these rules: -Nature inspired, with seasonal references/hints -Two separate ideas/thoughts/focus -Use the five senses -Show, don't tell. Show something true about the actual moment Poetry doesn't have to be perfect, it's an art and therefore will always be subjective.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2015 8:10:00 PM

Laura, WOW! WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Laura Owens
Date: 10/26/2015 8:17:00 PM

Thank you Linda. I'm writing a Haiku eBook, thought I'd kick it off with my view out the window today!

Judy Konos

Date: 10/26/2015 5:53:00 PM

Delightful meaning....delightfully written...Big 7..thanks.....

Laura Owens
Date: 10/26/2015 8:18:00 PM

Hi Judy, thank you for your kind comments.