Autumn's Paradise

I sit as I enjoy the bright rays 
from the sun allowing them 
to caress my olive colored face
absorbing it's refreshing warmth 
as it makes me glow

I lay back into this meadow filled 
with many sights, sounds, and smells 
of early Autumn 
The colors still vibrant yet more oranges, 
burnt reds, and browns blend 
into the scenery
The feel tickles my touch adding to the
assault upon my senses which only 
adds to this ineffable beauty

Ahhh it feels as if I found paradise......
I wish I could take it all inside 
myself and be happy forever yet 
knowing it's evanescent 
so as I take note I write it in pencil with 
eraser in hand......
I inhale the scents

Breathe in......
Breathe out......

Admiring the beauty then close my eyes
listening to the mellifluous sounds 
while I feel the opulent meadow
Knowing it but a matter of time before 
the next season takes it I know 
what I must do

I rise turning to take one last look 
at this paradise I hold my head up 
face tilted towards the last rays 
of the sun 
But already it's warmth grew chilly
And I smile back at this beauty 
It was Autumn's paradise
Leaving it as I found it 
in all it's glory.......

9/14/2019
2nd place
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Delaney Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Congratulations on your lovely Autumn scene, Brenda: congratulations on your top win. SuZ
Chiri Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 8:08 AM
Thank you Suzanne that is so sweet of you!;)
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September 24, 2019 at 12:59 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win poem, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chiri Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!;)
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Brenda congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
Chiri Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Mcgee Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your podium win Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 3:09 PM
Jeanne thanks so much!;)
Green Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Ah, I guess we told each other. : ) Congrats Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 3:09 PM
I guess we did didn't we!;) thanks Chris!;)
Smith Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 4:51 AM
A lovely poem Brenda, congrats. :)
Chiri Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 3:09 PM
Gary thank you so much!;)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 12:36 AM
This is beautiful and I wanted to congratulate you on your placement in the contest. Many blessings
Chiri Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:19 AM
Thank you Regina!;)
Green Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Absolutely beautiful, you have brought forth all of the enchantment and beauty of the coming season and placed it before us so that we may experience along with you. Wonderfully written Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Chris you are too kind!;)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 10:47 PM
This poem is full of wonderful crisp, fall imagery. It is lovely and inspiring to read.
Chiri Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 12:13 AM
Thank you Janis! That's so nice of you to say!;)
La France Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 8:25 PM
Brenda you have painted a beautiful scene with words, really lovely .
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Thank you so very much! I appreciate your visit!;)
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:25 PM
This is really really GOOD, Brenda. As Sandra says here, you really bring it to life!
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Thank you Andrea it means a lot to hear you say that!;)
Adams Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:25 PM
this is beautifully penned, you bring autumn's palette to life nicely in this one...great penning my friend :) hugs
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Thank you so much Sandy! I do value your opinion! And much appreciated!;)
Mcconnell Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:14 PM
Super piece Brenda telling well the glories of the autumnal season. A joy to read indeed. Have a great day,Gordon
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Ahh Gordon thank you!;)
Mohn Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 12:00 PM
This is splendid Brenda. I do think Autumn's allure has a lot to do with its blazing brevity...really liked this :)
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:48 PM
David thank you so much! Thank you for stopping by!;)
Scars Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 11:04 AM
wow beautifully expressed, def got the emotions and felt the essence of Autumn. Lovely poem sweet lady, as always ;)-luloo
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Laura thank you so much! Love your visits!;)
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September 15, 2019 at 6:42 AM
Absolutely enchanting poem, Poetess! Beautifully crafted poetry...a total joy to read. Does proper justice to the most stunning of all seasons. With much affection. :) john
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:47 PM
Ahhh thank you so much John! I love when you stop by and enjoy my poetry! Plus I'm glad you think I captured the season!;) all my affection!()
Y. Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 12:25 AM
WoW! Brenda, What a wonderful and lovely write. The scene you created with words transported your reader into your " Autumn" paradise. It looked amazing and I was amazed what I saw. Have a wonderful night:-) Alexis
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 2:04 AM
Thank you so much Alexis! I'm so glad it took you with me in its description! ;)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 10:56 PM
Loving the imagery, magical refrains, --too bad there's no contest to enter--ashamed--for its definitely 1st Place material! ~ Aloha always William
Chiri Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 11:43 PM
Ah William thank you so much!;) well we can't always have s contest I guess but it's ok I got the 1st place from you my friend!;)
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