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Autumn's Paradise

I sit as I enjoy the bright rays from the sun allowing them to caress my olive colored face absorbing it's refreshing warmth as it makes me glow I lay back into this meadow filled with many sights, sounds, and smells of early Autumn The colors still vibrant yet more oranges, burnt reds, and browns blend into the scenery The feel tickles my touch adding to the assault upon my senses which only adds to this ineffable beauty Ahhh it feels as if I found paradise...... I wish I could take it all inside myself and be happy forever yet knowing it's evanescent so as I take note I write it in pencil with eraser in hand...... I inhale the scents Breathe in...... Breathe out...... Admiring the beauty then close my eyes listening to the mellifluous sounds while I feel the opulent meadow Knowing it but a matter of time before the next season takes it I know what I must do I rise turning to take one last look at this paradise I hold my head up face tilted towards the last rays of the sun But already it's warmth grew chilly And I smile back at this beauty It was Autumn's paradise Leaving it as I found it in all it's glory....... 9/14/2019 2nd place

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Date: 9/24/2019 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely Autumn scene, Brenda: congratulations on your top win. SuZ
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/25/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne that is so sweet of you!;)
Date: 9/24/2019 12:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win poem, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!;)
Date: 9/24/2019 12:41:00 PM
Brenda congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 9/23/2019 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium win Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/23/2019 3:09:00 PM
Jeanne thanks so much!;)
Date: 9/23/2019 1:04:00 PM
Ah, I guess we told each other. : ) Congrats Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/23/2019 3:09:00 PM
I guess we did didn't we!;) thanks Chris!;)
Date: 9/23/2019 4:51:00 AM
A lovely poem Brenda, congrats. :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/23/2019 3:09:00 PM
Gary thank you so much!;)
Date: 9/23/2019 12:36:00 AM
This is beautiful and I wanted to congratulate you on your placement in the contest. Many blessings
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/23/2019 1:19:00 AM
Thank you Regina!;)
Date: 9/17/2019 7:37:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, you have brought forth all of the enchantment and beauty of the coming season and placed it before us so that we may experience along with you. Wonderfully written Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/17/2019 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Chris you are too kind!;)
Date: 9/15/2019 10:47:00 PM
This poem is full of wonderful crisp, fall imagery. It is lovely and inspiring to read.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/16/2019 12:13:00 AM
Thank you Janis! That's so nice of you to say!;)
Date: 9/15/2019 8:25:00 PM
Brenda you have painted a beautiful scene with words, really lovely .
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 9:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much! I appreciate your visit!;)
Date: 9/15/2019 6:25:00 PM
This is really really GOOD, Brenda. As Sandra says here, you really bring it to life!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Andrea it means a lot to hear you say that!;)
Date: 9/15/2019 5:25:00 PM
this is beautifully penned, you bring autumn's palette to life nicely in this one...great penning my friend :) hugs
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandy! I do value your opinion! And much appreciated!;)
Date: 9/15/2019 5:14:00 PM
Super piece Brenda telling well the glories of the autumnal season. A joy to read indeed. Have a great day,Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:49:00 PM
Ahh Gordon thank you!;)
Date: 9/15/2019 12:00:00 PM
This is splendid Brenda. I do think Autumn's allure has a lot to do with its blazing brevity...really liked this :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:48:00 PM
David thank you so much! Thank you for stopping by!;)
Date: 9/15/2019 11:04:00 AM
wow beautifully expressed, def got the emotions and felt the essence of Autumn. Lovely poem sweet lady, as always ;)-luloo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:48:00 PM
Laura thank you so much! Love your visits!;)
Date: 9/15/2019 6:42:00 AM
Absolutely enchanting poem, Poetess! Beautifully crafted poetry...a total joy to read. Does proper justice to the most stunning of all seasons. With much affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:47:00 PM
Ahhh thank you so much John! I love when you stop by and enjoy my poetry! Plus I'm glad you think I captured the season!;) all my affection!()
Date: 9/15/2019 12:25:00 AM
WoW! Brenda, What a wonderful and lovely write. The scene you created with words transported your reader into your " Autumn" paradise. It looked amazing and I was amazed what I saw. Have a wonderful night:-) Alexis
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 2:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis! I'm so glad it took you with me in its description! ;)
Date: 9/14/2019 10:56:00 PM
Loving the imagery, magical refrains, --too bad there's no contest to enter--ashamed--for its definitely 1st Place material! ~ Aloha always William
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/14/2019 11:43:00 PM
Ah William thank you so much!;) well we can't always have s contest I guess but it's ok I got the 1st place from you my friend!;)

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