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Autumn's Dream

golden moonlight streams through trees

whose limbs are laden with leaves

as wind's susurrus lulls me

into autumn's dream

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

October 12, 2020 at 3:06 PM

This dodoitsu evokes such beautiful imagery, in expressions like, 'golden moonlight streams through trees.' Congratulations on your well deserved win. :)

Paul Callus

October 8, 2020 at 9:12 AM

Congratulations on placing first with this delightful, dreamy poem, Andrea. Regards // paul

Jeanne Mcgee

October 7, 2020 at 6:57 AM

such a wonderful lullaby to autumn. Absolutely beautiful Andrea. congrats on your first place win.

Regina Mcintosh

October 6, 2020 at 5:15 PM

A beauty you've written :) Congrats on your top win. I love this. God bless you

Jan Allison

October 6, 2020 at 2:41 PM

super poems Andrea, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Newton Ranaweera

October 6, 2020 at 6:28 AM

Congratulation, Andrea, on your top 1st Place Win, for your gentle poetic piece!!

Constance La France

October 5, 2020 at 7:28 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance

Carol Mitra

October 4, 2020 at 8:30 PM

Super wow Andrea.....Loved the poem :) Congrats.

Linda Alice Fowler

October 4, 2020 at 12:27 PM

Lovely Andrea! Congratulations! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2020 at 11:53 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds

October 4, 2020 at 11:24 AM

Really beautiful Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win. Belle

John Watt

October 2, 2020 at 11:14 AM

"Susurrus" is word of the day! I love it, and perfect for this time of year. You've done well with this form. Your poetry is always so interesting to read ~ John

Quoth Theraven

October 2, 2020 at 8:48 AM

Andrea, Very nice to find this poem in Fall. Autumn, the best of show moon brings. And best time to rest in rustling dreams. -Richard

Connie Marcum Wong

October 2, 2020 at 8:18 AM

I am happy to welcome October and the cooler weather. Our sea temperature was 82 degrees yesterday and summer has been a hot one. I loved your entry Andrea. I think Constance will too! This full moon is an emotional one for our family this month. Blessings xxoo