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Autumn's Dream

golden moonlight streams through trees whose limbs are laden with leaves as wind's susurrus lulls me into autumn's dream

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Date: 10/12/2020 3:06:00 PM
This dodoitsu evokes such beautiful imagery, in expressions like, 'golden moonlight streams through trees.' Congratulations on your well deserved win. :)
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Date: 10/8/2020 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on placing first with this delightful, dreamy poem, Andrea. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/7/2020 6:57:00 AM
such a wonderful lullaby to autumn. Absolutely beautiful Andrea. congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 10/6/2020 5:15:00 PM
A beauty you've written :) Congrats on your top win. I love this. God bless you
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Date: 10/6/2020 2:41:00 PM
super poems Andrea, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/6/2020 6:28:00 AM
Congratulation, Andrea, on your top 1st Place Win, for your gentle poetic piece!!
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Date: 10/5/2020 7:28:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 10/4/2020 8:30:00 PM
Super wow Andrea.....Loved the poem :) Congrats.
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Date: 10/4/2020 12:27:00 PM
Lovely Andrea! Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/4/2020 11:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2020 11:24:00 AM
Really beautiful Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win. Belle
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:14:00 AM
"Susurrus" is word of the day! I love it, and perfect for this time of year. You've done well with this form. Your poetry is always so interesting to read ~ John
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Date: 10/2/2020 8:48:00 AM
Andrea, Very nice to find this poem in Fall. Autumn, the best of show moon brings. And best time to rest in rustling dreams. -Richard
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Date: 10/2/2020 8:18:00 AM
I am happy to welcome October and the cooler weather. Our sea temperature was 82 degrees yesterday and summer has been a hot one. I loved your entry Andrea. I think Constance will too! This full moon is an emotional one for our family this month. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/2/2020 1:46:00 AM
A great dream, Andrea. Best for a win. ~~
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