Get Your Premium Membership

Autumn's Change

The golden yellow’s russet reds Rain down with Autumn's changing hue. The bleak grey skies awash my dawn Instead, I yearn for Summer’s blue. Cool breezes blow throughout the day The golden yellows russet reds. Transition time of seasons bring This change of Autumn's carpet beds. Like Autumn leaves these words all fall Then scatter wildly on the page. The golden yellows russet reds Remain, and like this poem age. When night has turned into my day Will autumn colours stay instead. Or will they wither, blow away? The golden yellows, russet reds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/17/2023 3:50:00 AM
Themes of transitions and aging painted with soft and beautiful imagery. I love the golden yellows and russet reds. My favorite line is "This change of Autumn's carpet beds."
Login to Reply
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 10/17/2023 4:29:00 AM
Hi Robert Thank you for your review am pleased you you enjoyed Autumn poem Cheers Christine
Date: 10/13/2023 8:12:00 PM
Like Autumn leaves these words all fall Then scatter wildly on the page. The golden yellows russet reds Remain, and like this poem age. Favorite lines! This is beautiful
Login to Reply
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 10/14/2023 2:25:00 AM
Hi Karen Thank you so much for your lovely review I am pleased you liked this poem Cheers Christine
Date: 10/13/2023 7:37:00 PM
A lovely and delicate blend of thought.
Login to Reply
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 10/13/2023 7:42:00 PM
Hi Mat Thank you for your review, much appreciated Cheers Chris

Book: Shattered Sighs