Autumn's Breeze

Crisp Autumn seeps through the day
Dew balances a fresh cut blade

Tangerine skies seethe God's Grace
Summer's vehment blaze...replaced

Slipping sweetness around my pillow
Cool winds dance with weeping willow

Stars twinkle down through thick dense trees
As spirits dance in fresh Autumn's breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Delacroix Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 8:38 PM
wonderful couplet! Enjoyed it thoroughly. Congrats on your poem being featured this week and thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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December 3, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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December 1, 2009 at 4:24 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Jane. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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November 30, 2009 at 1:37 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Jane >> James
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November 30, 2009 at 6:11 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Strand Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 11:58 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Jane.Rgds Brian
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November 29, 2009 at 2:59 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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July 17, 2009 at 8:36 PM
thanks for your treasured comments! my friend Jane! love, jim (psss... still love this sweet-flowing art of yours!)
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July 15, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Jane, this poem just flows gently through me with delicious images, jim
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July 14, 2009 at 11:44 PM
One for my Favourites Jane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.It is indeed CA the poem was prompted by a news article I read.
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