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Autumn's Breeze

Crisp Autumn seeps through the day Dew balances a fresh cut blade Tangerine skies seethe God's Grace Summer's vehment blaze...replaced Slipping sweetness around my pillow Cool winds dance with weeping willow Stars twinkle down through thick dense trees As spirits dance in fresh Autumn's breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/4/2009 8:38:00 PM
wonderful couplet! Enjoyed it thoroughly. Congrats on your poem being featured this week and thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:11:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Jane. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:37:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Jane >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:11:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W.
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:58:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Jane.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/29/2009 2:59:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 7/17/2009 8:36:00 PM
thanks for your treasured comments! my friend Jane! love, jim (psss... still love this sweet-flowing art of yours!)
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Date: 7/15/2009 12:03:00 AM
Jane, this poem just flows gently through me with delicious images, jim
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Date: 7/14/2009 11:44:00 PM
One for my Favourites Jane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.It is indeed CA the poem was prompted by a news article I read.
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