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Contest Winner Medal 1 Autumn's Breath Elaine George

 

Autumn's Breath

The first breath of autumn -  so softly creeps
Kissing the face of summer -  as she sleeps
Stirring within - such passion and desire
Setting every bough and green leaf -  on fire

Ablaze of flames -  in shades -  of red and gold
Burning the meadows - and the valleys below
Autumn’s breath  -  a perfume of sweet decay
Hangs over the earth -  in a crimson haze

Memories rekindled -  in all the leaves
In their final hour  - still cling to the trees
Until Autumn expels  - her final  breath
And falls -  in a kaleidoscope  - to her death

Where her ashes will sleep beneath the snow
giving warmth to the seeds - buried below

                             ~~~

Author:  Elaine Cecelia George, of Canada

Written: August 23, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Drowley Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 12:08 PM
'Elaine, Congratulations on an excellent write. You have captured autumn well. David'
George   Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 4:10 AM
Thank you David.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 3:22 PM
We need more of your poetry here Elaine. This poem is so beautiful and inspiring. I am waiting to read more, and while I wait I will read the older posts like this wonder I missed. Congratulations on your win belated. #7 ; )
A   Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Congratulations! Elaine--Beautiful Breath of Air :-) I love Autumn.... hugs *LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:48 AM
Elaine a breath taking poem worthy winner congrats Shadow x smile
A  Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:17 AM
Elaine, congrats with your beautiful theme ~SKAT~
Morgan Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Adams Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 5:52 PM
lovely write...congrats on your win :)
Richards Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 11:46 AM
You do have a knack of taking one's breath away.......whatever the season. :) !!
Gorelick Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Pretty, pretty, pretty..congrats on a fine win. good to see you posting again. BG
Jones Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 5:47 PM
This is beautiful Elaine....congratulations
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Uniquely creative winning work..Congrats on your place in the winners' list..Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 12:12 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Elaine. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ryerson Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:19 PM
'A perfume of sweet decay'...Perfect, my friend and you are going directly to my fav poet list - Tim
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 11:50 AM
- A beautiful autumn poem, you get me almost to yearn for autumn - I do not like to say goodbye to summer. -Good luck in the contest, hope this is the winning poem! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend, Elaine! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Gorelick Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 11:27 AM
what a wonderful poem..flows with beautiful phrases. BG
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