Autumns Breath

I wander down the forest trails
the farmer collecting the last bales
golden brown they shine in the sun
the whirr of wings as birds escape the guns

The various gleaming colours of leaves
as spiraling down they twist and turn
the fields bare, stripped of their crops
now lay farrow resting until next spring 

Some light snow at foot of trees sparkles
pristine and lovely against the Autumn browns
sullen yet glowing the grey skies attract me
as I stroll on down to the bubbling brook

Flashes of brilliance as the kingfisher passes
he hovers above a post then alights to fish
a silver shadow comes in sight, he watches
then in a blur he dives and catches a fish

Now all that's left behind are glistening  ripples
spreading out far and wide in perfect cylindrical rings
watching them fade away as the water stills
becoming once more a mirror reflecting the azure skies

A massive pile of logs with scarlet toadstools scattered
the croak of a spotted frog as he takes a dive
yellow hammer is drilling away in the canopy
where verdant greens mix with red cedar leaves

The wonders awaiting at each step quite take my breath
a sly red fox disappearing through the emerald grasses
a roar and a crash of antlers as the fallow deer stags fight
their white spots shining as they spar back and forth

All this and birds singing with the pure joy of living 
the rustles that abound all around me as I listen
the glorious golds, reds and browns surround me
as I stand in a clearing drinking all the beauty in

Written 08/12/2013

contest   Autumns Breath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 14, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations Shadow!!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 1:14 PM
hi Linda Ty for reading and nice review Shadow x smile
Deschler Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 3:24 PM
The autumn imagery in this poem is rich and beautiful, making this a very enjoyable poem to read. Nicely done, Shadow! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!
Hamilton Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 6:16 AM
hi Kelly and keep writing loved your poem and ty for kind review of my work Shadow x smile
A  Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:28 AM
beautiful... congrats ~SKAT~
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:24 AM
Ty Skat appreciated Shadow x smile
Morgan Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:42 PM
Linda,Congrats on your win. Morgan
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:25 AM
hi and TY Morgan Shadow x smile
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 1:15 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning contest entry..Congrats on your placement in the winners' list..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:26 AM
hi Sara ty so much Shadow x smile
Lamoureux Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 8:08 AM
Breathtaking! Congratulations.
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:26 AM
hi Richard and Ty so kind of you Shadow x smile
Rain Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Wonderful ! congratulations !!
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:27 AM
hi Yvette ty so much Shadow x smile
Jones Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 6:13 PM
Shadow....a beautiful win..congratulations
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:28 AM
hi Donna Ty much appreciated Shadow x smile
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 12:21 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Shadow. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:29 AM
well done on win and ty Autumn the pause before winter Shadow x smile
Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 12:45 PM
wow! what a vivid description
Hamilton Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 5:30 PM
ty Vandana I like writing about nature Shadow x smiles
May Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 5:57 AM
beautiful write Shadow.....you capture the breath of autumn well...
Hamilton Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 1:41 PM
Tnx Joseph it's a beautiful time of year so inspiring Shadow x smiles
Jones Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 4:04 PM
Can see and hear everything through your words Shadow,,,nicely done....
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 4:19 PM
hi Donna I love it when as you read it takes shape before your eyes glad you felt that Ty Shadow x smiles
Onclaud Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 10:24 AM
would love to watch and feel the views on widescreen , shadow... such visual appeal that enchants my senses...:) entranced..:huggs
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 3:11 PM
Hi Nette someone else who appreciates simple beauty ty for reading Shadow x smiles
Tacito Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 8:53 AM
You really know how to set the tone of the environment. It feels almost Victorian style. I truly enjoy what you did here.
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 3:14 PM
hi Drake where have you been? i missed you. Victoerian hum I think you are right lol well spotted Shadow xox smiles
J.T. Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 11:59 PM
Nicely done. I like the pastoral scene depicted through these lines
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 5:38 AM
hi PJ ty for taking time to read my work most inspiring Shadow x smiles
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