Autumn's Blush

It's October now;
the air seems somewhat cooler
than my thoughts, yet, I can feel
the warmth in the breeze as it kisses
the trees.
They're turning slightly red
as I did, and am now, in remembering
when our lips first met.

It won't be long now
till they undress;
all good things fall
naked beneath covers of white.
Soon they'll reach out in anticipation
and feel the first few flakes of innocence
covering them deep within layers of thought.

They'll be less red then,
and more at ease in their nakedness
as they breathe deeper.

The wind's changing pitch again,
it's rising high in the hills,
falling low through the valley below.
I can feel it shifting with my thoughts
as I pull back the layers of my own mind.
It's no longer cool, this air, but rather warm
as it mingles your scent with memory, this day.

It's October, yet, I wonder,
will I too fall naked
and less red before autumn's passing?

The wind is calm right now,
it's pausing, but it's still October
and the trees are still slightly red
although I, I am more autumn-like
than they, in my remembering.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Adebayo Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 3:44 AM
Sandra, you made me blush...nice one darling
Fleming Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 8:14 PM
A very lovely poem...This I truly enjoyed! My best regards, Sandra - Cheers! :) john
Rodrigues Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 6:41 AM
Very nice, Sandra! Your thought, memories, changes flow with the seasons on the simple beauty of their revealing colors.
Kimathi Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 12:00 PM
I could feel the texture of your piece as I read through it..... Beautiful work, Sandra!! ;-) Congrats for having it featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
Davis Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 7:22 PM
This poem is very illustrative and full of imagery in each line you read. Great work.
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 2:49 PM
this is really nice free verse. I think this is your forte! Loved the personification in this one.
Ellison Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Well written my dear Sandra! You paint a colourful picture of this most beautiful time of the year! Welcome to the Soup... hugs, Jack
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October 14, 2012 at 8:22 PM
Sandra, I love October, but down here in Texas, you will not see this image... Especially no red in them leaves.. love your poem ..xox~pd
Wellington Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 8:14 PM
Awesome beauty, Sandy. A sketch of the poets mind. Loving this a lot. One love Joy Wells
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