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Autumn's Beauty

Autumn’s golden gown is falling
Falling leaves carpeting the ground;
Ground bedecked in nature’s splendour
Splendour displayed, beauty surrounds.

Inspired by Nette's contest
Jan Allison
11th June 2015

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Dorian Petersen Potter June 18, 2015 at 9:21 AM Beautiful pen Jan! I love the fall images so colorfully painted here in this piece my dear friend.So beautifully written.I enjoyed it!A 7!Wishing you a lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D." Jan Allison June 18, 2015 at 9:22 AM Thanks so much Dorian:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser June 15, 2015 at 2:59 PM The longest day is near, soon Autumn will be. Golly it's been a quick year. Love Autumn, love the colours that nature brings in it's demise. Golden Gowns like you is how I describe such vistas, hugs, James xx Jan Allison June 15, 2015 at 3:01 PM I love the autumnal colours James:-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka June 15, 2015 at 8:28 AM Another beautiful write Jan. Belated congrats on POTD I know it will do well in the contest.Janet Jan Allison June 15, 2015 at 10:40 AM I wrote it Janet then realised it did not fit any of the images so I penned another one - got 2 poems for the price of one lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith June 13, 2015 at 9:13 PM Congrats Jan...I'll have lots of catching up to do when I get back home next weekend.... 14 hrs at the baseball fields today and back again in 8 hrs... Jan Allison June 14, 2015 at 8:02 AM Hope the kids are having fun Tim:-) Hugs jan xx

Cindi Rockwell June 13, 2015 at 8:57 PM Love this. Can feel the heat and hear the crackle of a bonfire in October. Great write! Jan Allison June 14, 2015 at 8:01 AM Thanks so much Cindi:-) Hugs Jan xx

The Grahamburglar June 13, 2015 at 8:35 PM Wow, this is great! Congrats on POTD, Jan. =) Jan Allison June 14, 2015 at 8:01 AM Thanks Preston:-) Hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 13, 2015 at 7:14 PM How beautiful, Jan! Congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda Jan Allison June 14, 2015 at 8:00 AM Thanks Rhonda - I guess it's not bad for someone who writes 'pooh poetry' lol:-) hugs Jan xx

David Meade June 13, 2015 at 5:25 PM Autumn’s beauty reflects the beauty of its author! Nicely done Jan, a lovely and wonderful poem. Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:33 PM Thanks so much for such a lovely comment David. I am to do another talk at school on creative writing - hope I can use this and some of my other poems to inspire the students:-)Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus June 13, 2015 at 5:24 PM Congratulations Jan!!! POTD...well done:) Hugs // paul Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:30 PM Thanks so much Paul I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. June 13, 2015 at 9:46 AM Jan, Congrats on getting the poem of the day! I dont know how I missed this beautiful piece. However, I see why it was chosen:) Alexis Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 9:54 AM Thanks Alexis I am delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr June 13, 2015 at 8:08 AM congratulations Jan on your selection of Poem of the Day for this fine write. Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 8:17 AM Thanks so much Robert:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance June 13, 2015 at 6:35 AM Grats on poem of the day, this is beautiful Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 8:03 AM Thanks Cas I am stunned to get Poem of the day - I guess my poems aren't that that bad really lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2015 at 5:32 AM - Dear Jan, congratulations on today's poem !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:34 AM Oh WOW thanks Anne Lise I am delighted:-) I have been asked to do a talk on creative writing at school - I hope this will inspire the students:-) hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton June 12, 2015 at 6:03 PM magnificent Jan hugs 7 + fav Jan Allison June 12, 2015 at 6:07 PM Thanks Shadow:-) Hugs jan xx

Constance La France June 12, 2015 at 3:56 PM Jan back to read this great poem again. and thanks for visiting my poem, no headstone Jan Allison June 12, 2015 at 3:58 PM Thanks for dropping by again i do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus June 11, 2015 at 4:27 PM This is lovely, Jan! Nature never fails to inspire. I failed to finish my entry in time:( Hugs // paul Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 4:30 PM I got this one totally wrong Paul - but had to post it and i managed to get one penned for the contest:-) hugs Jan x

David Brown June 11, 2015 at 2:44 PM Wow, what beautiful rhythm and flow Jan. Lovely Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 4:05 PM Thanks david:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2015 at 11:15 AM - A truly wonderful and colorful poem Jan - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 1:34 PM thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France June 11, 2015 at 11:00 AM Jan, this is outstanding and awesome 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry today Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 1:33 PM Your poem today was absolutely outstanding and has prompted me to have a go at that tough form:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez June 11, 2015 at 10:55 AM Loved the fallen gown, Jan. :-) Maybe that's why they call it the BARE trees. Wonder if you can come up with a poem about it. It wouldn't be much of a challenge to you, I know. lol! hugs! Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 1:31 PM lol i can work on it :-) I try and rise to a challenge lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet June 11, 2015 at 10:48 AM Well written, not easy to do. I tried to write one of these and found it too difficult and gave up. Beautiful. Emile. #7 Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 10:50 AM It was my first attempt then I realised it didn't fit the contest images lol so I got 2 poems for the price of one :-) Hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv June 11, 2015 at 9:49 AM This is SO lovely, dear Jan!! I loved it!! :D :D Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 9:51 AM I wrote it for the contest my brain wasn't functioning as it didn't fit any of the images lol so I got 2 poems for the one contest:- hugs jan xx