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Autumn’s golden gown is falling Falling leaves carpeting the ground; Ground bedecked in nature’s splendour Splendour displayed, beauty surrounds. Inspired by Nette's contest Jan Allison 11th June 2015

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/18/2015 9:21:00 AM

Beautiful pen Jan! I love the fall images so colorfully painted here in this piece my dear friend.So beautifully written.I enjoyed it!A 7!Wishing you a lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D."

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 9:22:00 AM

Thanks so much Dorian:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 6/15/2015 2:59:00 PM

The longest day is near, soon Autumn will be. Golly it's been a quick year. Love Autumn, love the colours that nature brings in it's demise. Golden Gowns like you is how I describe such vistas, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2015 3:01:00 PM

I love the autumnal colours James:-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 6/15/2015 8:28:00 AM

Another beautiful write Jan. Belated congrats on POTD I know it will do well in the contest.Janet

Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2015 10:40:00 AM

I wrote it Janet then realised it did not fit any of the images so I penned another one - got 2 poems for the price of one lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/13/2015 9:13:00 PM

Congrats Jan...I'll have lots of catching up to do when I get back home next weekend.... 14 hrs at the baseball fields today and back again in 8 hrs...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2015 8:02:00 AM

Hope the kids are having fun Tim:-) Hugs jan xx

Cindi Rockwell

Date: 6/13/2015 8:57:00 PM

Love this. Can feel the heat and hear the crackle of a bonfire in October. Great write!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thanks so much Cindi:-) Hugs Jan xx

The Grahamburglar

Date: 6/13/2015 8:35:00 PM

Wow, this is great! Congrats on POTD, Jan. =)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thanks Preston:-) Hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/13/2015 7:14:00 PM

How beautiful, Jan! Congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2015 8:00:00 AM

Thanks Rhonda - I guess it's not bad for someone who writes 'pooh poetry' lol:-) hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 6/13/2015 5:25:00 PM

Autumn’s beauty reflects the beauty of its author! Nicely done Jan, a lovely and wonderful poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 5:33:00 PM

Thanks so much for such a lovely comment David. I am to do another talk at school on creative writing - hope I can use this and some of my other poems to inspire the students:-)Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2015 5:24:00 PM

Congratulations Jan!!! POTD...well done:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 5:30:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/13/2015 9:46:00 AM

Jan, Congrats on getting the poem of the day! I dont know how I missed this beautiful piece. However, I see why it was chosen:) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 9:54:00 AM

Thanks Alexis I am delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 6/13/2015 8:08:00 AM

congratulations Jan on your selection of Poem of the Day for this fine write.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 8:17:00 AM

Thanks so much Robert:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/13/2015 6:35:00 AM

Grats on poem of the day, this is beautiful

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 8:03:00 AM

Thanks Cas I am stunned to get Poem of the day - I guess my poems aren't that that bad really lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2015 5:32:00 AM

- Dear Jan, congratulations on today's poem !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 5:34:00 AM

Oh WOW thanks Anne Lise I am delighted:-) I have been asked to do a talk on creative writing at school - I hope this will inspire the students:-) hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/12/2015 6:03:00 PM

magnificent Jan hugs 7 + fav

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 6:07:00 PM

Thanks Shadow:-) Hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 6/12/2015 3:56:00 PM

Jan back to read this great poem again. and thanks for visiting my poem, no headstone

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 3:58:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by again i do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/11/2015 4:27:00 PM

This is lovely, Jan! Nature never fails to inspire. I failed to finish my entry in time:( Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 4:30:00 PM

I got this one totally wrong Paul - but had to post it and i managed to get one penned for the contest:-) hugs Jan x

David Brown

Date: 6/11/2015 2:44:00 PM

Wow, what beautiful rhythm and flow Jan. Lovely

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 4:05:00 PM

Thanks david:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/11/2015 11:15:00 AM

- A truly wonderful and colorful poem Jan - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 1:34:00 PM

thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 6/11/2015 11:00:00 AM

Jan, this is outstanding and awesome 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry today

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 1:33:00 PM

Your poem today was absolutely outstanding and has prompted me to have a go at that tough form:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/11/2015 10:55:00 AM

Loved the fallen gown, Jan. :-) Maybe that's why they call it the BARE trees. Wonder if you can come up with a poem about it. It wouldn't be much of a challenge to you, I know. lol! hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 1:31:00 PM

lol i can work on it :-) I try and rise to a challenge lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/11/2015 10:48:00 AM

Well written, not easy to do. I tried to write one of these and found it too difficult and gave up. Beautiful. Emile. #7

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 10:50:00 AM

It was my first attempt then I realised it didn't fit the contest images lol so I got 2 poems for the price of one :-) Hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/11/2015 9:49:00 AM

This is SO lovely, dear Jan!! I loved it!! :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 9:51:00 AM

I wrote it for the contest my brain wasn't functioning as it didn't fit any of the images lol so I got 2 poems for the one contest:- hugs jan xx