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Autumnless

Wow, Autumn!!! Through picturesque poetry I can witness your beauteous grandeur marked by captivating color-change radiance showcasing what your Season* graciously performs designed by the Almighty Creator. Oh, Autumn!!! I can virtually behold your wrought wonders shining in every hue’s detail as glowing leaves of magenta dominate while boughs of crimson and scarlet sway midst foliage magnified by maroon shades and orange tints. Yes, Autumn!!! Bereft of actual exposure to your marvelous sight I admit my innocence of your essence while admiring nature’s revealed pleasure through your iridescent phenomenon letting me bask under imaginary florid Fall’s path. Now, Autumn!!! Though I yearn for your crisp, chilly breeze wafting scent of serenity thrill and blissful cheer my soul is settled, thankful for tropical climate offering fellowship warmth and faith ardor these rainy days vanquishing oppressive blows of humidity.
*Ecclesiastes 3:1 To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven. October 24, 2020 1st place, "Still-Life Autumn" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 10/25/2020.
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Legros Kelley Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 8:42 PM
My kitchen is decorated in Harvest colors all year long. It is my favorite season. I live in a desert region where we only have a glimpse of fall unless we drive to higher ground :-) I have one tree that drops her leaves, but they are all one color, not the vibrant hues I see in pictures. <3
Watt Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Beata, I've been to the Philippines and I know there are two seasons: hot and hotter! I can relate to your poem, I live in southern California where there is very little seasonal variation, and sometimes I long for the colored trees, the brisk breeze, and the cool rains. Loved your poem and your scripture reference, congrats on your win. Grace and peace ~ John
Kauffman Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Such a creative blending of the theme, scripture and your tropical fall experience. There are so many beautiful images. Congratulations my friend. Sending you blessings of the season!
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 5:37 AM
- Nice to take part in this beautiful poem :) - Congratulations on your win, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win, great imagery . Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:15 PM
wonderfully imagined from your pen, Beata. The season you do not get to live (you are NOT missing out when the chill breezes come!!)
Delaney Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Glad you are enjoying your Autumless days in balmy tropical breezes. I enjoyed your POV on this one. Very clever. SuZ
Mcintosh Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:41 AM
This is lovely and the theme is my favorite season. I love fall. It's amazingly inspiring. God bless you sweet lady
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