Autumnal Charm
garden spills
its floral parade,
charmed by fall
tints bursting
with mauve, orange mosaic--
adorned by bright air
* new form:shadorma---3-5-3-3-7-5
For Russel Sivey's Up the Autumn Air
by nette onclaud
22 oct 12
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