Notes About The Poem

September 29, 2023; Placed 1st: Autumnal Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Soto Poet

Placed 4th: Number 1246 Premium Contest by Brian Strand

Poem of the day on October 1, 2023


 

Autumnal

In depth of woods how autumn dazzles, swirling beauty of ornate décor,
Waltzing with ochre hickory, birch; whirling flaxen moods of sycamore,
Gracing my view upon blazing foothills, where vistas gamboge scroll,
Bedecking maples, swaying rhythms, with fiery red of shimmying knoll.

Zephyrs of west rustle demeanor of black tupelo, fluttering leaves gold,
Glistening burnt orange of sugar maple, revelers in sundown behold,
As remnants of gilded twilight beams, glimmer in purpled afterglow,
Weaving motifs of fall in tapestries idyllic, of blushing eventide aglow.

Autumn’s grandeur glows, as crisp frost gleams, mellowing overcast days,
Where gelid winds shudder trees, foretelling imminent wintry malaise,
Meandering with leaves falling gently; carpeting dyed, chromatic meadows,
As the arena of fall’s resplendent show, shimmers in elongated shadows.

Harvest Moon enamors sights, appealing to fervor of romantic glance,
Enthralled watching dance of stars, attuned to tenor of cosmic expanse,
Gliding over a charming night, wooing souls glued to autumn’s ruby fire,
Flaunting pizazz panoramic~ a farewell of fall-splendor, in cerise attire.

Turning life’s pages of albums, treasured memories rekindle seasons past,
Thankful for the abundance of goodwill~ heavenly blessings destiny cast;
As conversations savor aroma of pumpkin pies; buttery, nutty, apple tarts,
Spending time with family, friends; exchanging missives of kindred hearts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 8:46 PM
I would love to jump into this beautiful piece. It's imagery is absolutely lovely. Autumn gives poets so much my write about. I love the season and I bet you do too.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Another breathlessly beautiful, colorful and vibrantly penned masterpiece of art is your poem Vijay! I see it won in a contest, no surprise!! Congratulations! <3
Williams Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 2:57 AM
Oh my goodness - you brought Autumn to life vividly with your astonishing vocabulary. Reminds me of Japan in autumn. We have just entered Spring in Australia.If this is for a contest, all the best Vijay. Hugs Maria
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 1:21 PM
Your "Autumnal" is a lovely write. I love this one. I am back after 3 weeks off the computer. I needed a rest. Have a blessed day writing away............
Poet Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Dear Vijay, congratulations on your win in my contest. This exquisite piece of poetry is a true feast for the senses, overflowing with an abundance of vivid and captivating imagery. Your mastery of language is evident in the flawless composition of this well-crafted poem. Within its verses, you skillfully portray the transitions with such intricate precision and eloquence that one cannot help but marvel at your artistry.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 7:17 PM
You entrance us with your abundant imagery, dear friend! An artist who paints with words. Congratulations on your win!
Canerdy Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 5:27 PM
Vijay, this is a masterpiece of vivid descriptions. Janice
Eslinger Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Vijay, I enjoyed the painting in every line. Great descriptive language, word choices & combinations, giving an intense, complete picture just as we see it on every street here in Bluegrass, KY hugs for your fine pen!
Messina Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 3:03 AM
Fantastic and lovely, Vijay. Belated Congrats on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Bursting with imagery, dear poet! Congratulations on POTD!
Meadows Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 11:32 PM
A lovely autumnal poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Thank you Jeanette--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Schatz Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:12 PM
Hi Vijay. Congratulations on POTD! It's a stunning poem! One of the most beautiful ones I've on Poetry Soup, or elsewhere for that matter.
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:47 AM
So very nice of you to say so, Robert. Glad to see you on my page. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Roper Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:00 PM
Another outstanding poem with so much imagery. Congratulations on POTD
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Happy to see you again, Eve. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:49 PM
Congrats on the well earned POTD. This is a real beauty
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:46 AM
hank you Andrea--much appreciate.
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October 1, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Congratulations on POTD, what a beautiful and graceful poem to bring in the fall
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:45 AM
So nice of you to say so. Many thanks for stopping by, Stephan--much appreciate.
Delaney Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your wonderful POTD. I love Autumn and your descriptions are rich and beautiful. Enjoy the Spotlight. Best SuZ
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Glad to see you again, SuZ. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:22 PM
The scent of pumpkin pie and sweet apples come to mind, and your happy poem fits right in Vijay, a poem perfected to say the least :)
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Vienna.
Toney Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:21 PM
Such a delightful depiction of my favorite season, Vijay. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Thank you Mark. So glad you stopped by. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Downing  Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 5:47 PM
OMG!!! Vijay, this one in itself is displaying everything beauty of a masterpiece of art. Fantastic poem, my friend. BIG YES, my fave :)
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:42 AM
So glad to see you again, Akkina. Your glowing remarks are much appreciated, my friend. Many thanks for your visit and a special thank you for your FAVE.
Nicole Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 5:38 PM
As Autumn shares its vibrant colors, my heart welcomes the beauty. Beyond seasonal, this is beautiful and also satisfying to the senses. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Much appreciate your return visit, Brandy. Many thanks for your kind sentiments, as always. Hugs to you as well, my friend.
Buehler Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 4:52 PM
I'm back with delighted congratulations on POTD, Vijay. A magnificent creation! :)
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate, Evelyn.
Nuwas Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 4:19 PM
My favorite season and a beautiful poem about it :)
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Much appreciate Aysha--many thanks.
Bowring Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Many congratulations dear Vijay on your POTD with your stunning autumnal, delightfully, scrumptious poem! Line after line of glorious visual appreciation of all the season has to offer, ‘fluttering leaves gold’’ glimmer in purpled afterglow’ ‘ autumn’s ruby fire’. So exquisite as always from your shining, golden pen. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. Congratulations! Hugs and smiles :):)
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:38 AM
So very kind of you Christina. Much appreciate your glowing feedback. Many thanks. Hugs and smiles to you as well.
La France Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Vijay, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 12:31 PM
So glad to see you again, Constance. Much appreciate your comments and your presence on my page. Many thanks for all you do to encourage poets by sponsoring contests.
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