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Put away your bathing suit the dips in the pool are done get the rake out of the garage, jumping in the leaves is fun. The Halloween decorations include the ginormous spider; exchange the ice-cold lemonade for hot apple cider. The summers end raced tirelessly to the full autumn stop, and the rain chills more with each pounding drop. The heat of the sun fizzles out with each windy howl, and the moon glared its face with an ice cold scowl. Early fall boast trees with the most fiery bright hue but time marches on colors become brown and gray stew. Around the campfire people gather around and sing as a church group leader strums his six strings. Autumnal is the transition from summer to winter Its weather patters are nestled in the center.

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Date: 11/10/2023 9:32:00 AM
Lovely description of the autumn's arrival Miranda!!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 11/10/2023 3:37:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 10/6/2023 3:04:00 PM
Love this, Miranda! A fave! Congratulations!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/6/2023 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, and I am glad this is one of your favorites!
Date: 10/5/2023 10:35:00 AM
- Beautifully described, congratulations on your win Miranda :) - hugs
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/5/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/5/2023 9:58:00 AM
Miranda, congratulations on your triumphant win in my contest. This exquisite piece of poetry is a true feast for the senses, overflowing with an abundance of vivid and captivating imagery. Your mastery of language is evident in the flawless composition of this well-crafted sonnet. Within its verses, you skillfully portray the transitions with such intricate precision and eloquence that one cannot help but marvel at your artistry.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/5/2023 7:34:00 PM
Cheers, and I am glad you choose mine as a winner. Thank you!
Date: 9/30/2023 8:20:00 PM
Love it! God bless you. Love, Gina
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 9/30/2023 9:23:00 PM
Thank you for that.
Date: 9/29/2023 2:11:00 AM
This is a beautiful, delightfully visual poem Miranda. Well written sonnet. You have described the transition so well. Very poetic lines,’ and the moon glared its face with an ice cold scowl’’ trees with the most fiery bright hue’. I particularly love the last line. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 9/29/2023 8:16:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed this poem, thank you!
Date: 9/27/2023 1:59:00 PM
This is a lovely poem!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 9/27/2023 2:12:00 PM
Thank you for that!

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