Autumnal

Autumnal  9-26-23
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Autumnal 

Autumn spreads autumnal wings
Between sun and celestial
And soars into hues of dusky blue vaults,
When leaves drip in shades of ochre crimson,
Gliding through boughs on pinions
Of splendor, robed in aubergine,
Leaving marigold feathers to flutter on fields 
Like the scent of umber down.

Autumnal guardian fans out majestic plumes,
Steward of golden magenta glory
Drifts on a soft plumage of harvest serenades
When golden love notes sail above grandeur -
Quiver as summer dances into slumber
On amber brewed scarlet currents -
Wings that never weary trail orange tides 
Into harbingers of violet vernal vitality.  

~Autumn spreads autumnal wings~
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Of splendor, robed in aubergine, Leaving marigold feathers to flutter on fields Like the scent of umber down...so cool! Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 10:26 AM
- Back with a happy congratulations, Sam :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Sam, So classy as ever, my friend. Your imagination is soaring high into 'hues of blue vaults' like autumn leaves 'gliding through boughs on pinions of splendor,'! You have spread your wings as autumn wings that never get weary! Excellent.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line "Autumn spreads autumnal wings." So true. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 1:08 PM
- Thank you for giving me this beautiful autumn picture, Sam - Really enjoy your color choice :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Sambourne Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 9:37 PM
So many memorable lines here Sam, like "when leaves drip in shades of ochre." Congratulations! Be well. Brian
George Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 9:18 PM
So classy as ever, dear Sam. Your imagination is soaring high into 'hues of bliue vaults' like autumn leaves 'gliding through boughs on pinions of splendor,'! You have spread your wings as autumn wings that never get weary! Excellent.
Hind Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Like a piece of music, this one! Very very classy...
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 3:01 PM
So so gorgeous. A winner for sure
One Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:40 PM
What a wonderful use of words to weave a poem full of imagery which perfectly depicts Autumn.. Love that line, Leaving marigold feathers to flutter on fields .. The way you have described things here is so poetic...
Daniel Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 3:29 AM
Beautifully enchanting, Sam:)
Kauffman Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Thank you so much, Jo! I like your description of this poem as "enchanting!" Truly autumn is an enchanted season - a fairyland of color, texture and amazing sights! Hope you are well. Blessings!
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