Autumnal

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"Autumn is a second spring when every leaf is a flower." - Albert Camus

Upon the barren tree, the last leaf clings tight, 
Between the branches, it holds on with might, 
Unable to escape, able to see, 
It waits for the wind to set it free. 

I've witnessed the blossoms of spring in bloom, 
The whispers of leaves in summer's perfume, 
Roses kissed by dew, love in the sun's rays, 
Sunflowers chasing the sun's golden blaze. 

As seasons change, like the passage of years, 
The leaves on trees quiver, their end draws near, 
The wind blows, dust devils dance in the air, 
Leaves fall to the ground without a care.
 
As the last leaf, I gaze upon the view, 
The valley, hills, adorned with vibrant hue, 
A painting that changes, day by day, 
Though colors fade, its beauty won't betray. 

The nights grow colder, filled with ghostly cheer, 
Halloween approaches, drawing near, 
Children in the streets, seeking sweet delight, 
Jack-o'-lanterns glow, casting eerie light. 

As the last leaf, my days are not endless, 
I cherish my view, as time soon compresses,
Eventually, I will join the earth’s embrace,
But please keep me safe, as a bookmark’s grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/5/2023 11:12:00 AM
- Back to congratulate you on a great win, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 10/5/2023 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. The last leaf says, winter is here. Autumn is a great time of the year. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 9/26/2023 1:06:00 PM
Hi Jay. This is one of the most emotional personifications I've ever read. I'm glad it was your hand that wrote it. Exceptionally well done. Lots of great lines, but I'm partial to these, "Roses kissed by dew, love in the sun's rays, Sunflowers chasing the sun's golden blaze." I'm faving it.
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Date: 9/25/2023 9:02:00 PM
This is such a soulful song celebrating the beauty of autumn and bewailing the inevitable end that awaits all. "But please keep me safe, as a bookmark’s grace." This plea at the end is heart stirring ! I am sure this will be placed high.
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Date: 9/25/2023 10:45:00 AM
- The last leaf ... a little breeze/gone with the wind ... - A lovely poem, Jay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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