AUTUMN WINDS

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AUTUMN WINDS 
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let the crisp autumn winds blow~
clouds pirouette in a rainbow sky.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/5/2025 9:06:00 PM

Vivid imagery, Sara ~ charming

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/6/2025 6:59:00 AM

thanks for visiting and for your encouraging words!

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 9/5/2025 9:04:00 PM

Such an enchanting couplet!! A couple of days ago we had a double rainbow at our place! Nature is beautiful.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/6/2025 6:58:00 AM

oh my! a double rainbow...exciting stuff! Yes, nature is beautiful regardless....even during the violent storm we experienced last night. I watched it entranced. enjoy your weekend, hugs, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/5/2025 6:35:00 PM

Absolutely, can't stop them anyway. Well, they couldn't when I was kid. Who the heck knows now? Even weather maybe no longer safe. Reassuring rainbow. Good one, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/6/2025 6:57:00 AM

yes, now is a different story. Sometimes weather does feel safe. I ramble...thanks for visiting and sharing your thoughts. enjoy your weekend, Sara