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Autumn Wind

A litany of leaves tango
to the tune of your chilly flow,
so windblown.

Moody clouds move silently by
in a turbulent silver sky,
as windfalls.

Showing signs of your wrath, the trees,
to whipping the waves of the seas,
so windswept.

© 2014 Connie Marcum Wong
11-16-14
WIND - Compound Word Verse

Copyright © Connie Marcum Wong | Year Posted 2014

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Kelly Deschler Date: 11/3/2015 4:52:00 PM A lovely poem and an enjoyable read, Connie... Congratulations on a great win! Login to Reply

Neva Romaine Date: 10/20/2015 9:12:00 AM Hey Connie, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the contest! A well deserved win. Be Blessed, Neva Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/19/2015 3:29:00 PM Congratulations on a deserved win, Connie. I remember reading this before; even then it served you well, since it was also a winner! Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/19/2015 5:07:00 AM Congrats on ur sweet win Connie! Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/19/2015 1:51:00 PM Thank you much Dr. Sharma. XX Connie

Carrie Richards Date: 10/18/2015 7:37:00 PM So lovely, Connie!! And I love the format, and the use of the compound wind so cleverly ! Great piece it is !! Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/19/2015 1:50:00 PM Thank you Carrie. That form was created by my friend Margaret Smith. It is challenging but really nice. Blessings, Connie

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/18/2015 3:46:00 PM Connie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/19/2015 1:48:00 PM I enjoyed your blog. Thank you for my placement in your contest! Blessings, Connie

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/29/2014 12:24:00 AM This is just beautiful,congrats on the win Connie. Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 11/28/2014 10:04:00 AM Connie, I love what you did in these words. Your imagery is just beautiful. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2014 3:50:00 PM Congratulations Connie! This was surely one of the best in this contest, thus a deserved win...with the first stanza being my favourite. // paul Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/27/2014 1:05:00 PM Beautiful, Connie! Congrats and Happy Thanksgiving! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 11/26/2014 11:40:00 AM Hi Connie, You gave this poem a spectacular life, passion and energy. Very interesting. Nicely structured also. Congratulations on an excellent win. Happy Thanksgiving! Earl Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/26/2014 6:01:00 AM ohh how you glide and flow with this one, connie!.. love it.. thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your fine win! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/25/2014 11:50:00 PM BIG congrats on the well deserved win, Connie. I am feeling so sad tonight. I forgot to enter my poem and it was the only one for earth. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/26/2014 2:36:00 AM Oh how sad Andrea. I loved yours. Makes sense now that I didn't see it on the winners list.

Joseph May Date: 11/25/2014 7:57:00 PM Congrats on your win Connie Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/25/2014 6:59:00 PM I so enjoyed your use of alliteration & language (last one, 2nd line, too?) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/25/2014 5:59:00 PM Hi Connie, stopping back to congratulate you on your 2nd place win! I knew from the beginning your poem would be on the podium! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/25/2014 5:14:00 PM Great Job, you really brought poetic life to the wind. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/25/2014 4:28:00 PM Congratulations on your win Connie. Every individual stanza beautifully penned. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/25/2014 4:05:00 PM I love these wind poems. Yours is wonderful. Congrats. BG Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 2:54:00 PM Its a delight to read this again Connie - Many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 11/25/2014 8:45:00 AM Excellent flow and imagery. Great expression in such a short piece in such a restricted form. Super 7 from me. Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 11/24/2014 7:12:00 AM Beautiful descriptions of why I love autumn. Nature is so vibrant and alive during this season. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/23/2014 10:37:00 PM Hi Connie, I love the way you used your words to create the imagery of Autumn wind, and how wonderfully it all flows together. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/23/2014 4:12:00 PM So beautiful!Fantastic!! sweet lady. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/23/2014 8:08:00 PM Thank you Charmaine. It is my favorite season. Mahalo, Connie

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/18/2014 12:48:00 AM I love this form and how you used words so magically to convey the feeling and the fury of the wind. GREAT picture too, connie. It's all gorgeous. a SEVEN from me too. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/18/2014 1:47:00 AM Thank you Andrea. I love Margaret's form too. The compound words really add to the beauty of her form.

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