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A litany of leaves tango to the tune of your chilly flow, so windblown. Moody clouds move silently by in a turbulent silver sky, as windfalls. Showing signs of your wrath, the trees, to whipping the waves of the seas, so windswept. © 2014 Connie Marcum Wong 11-16-14 WIND - Compound Word Verse

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/3/2015 4:52:00 PM

A lovely poem and an enjoyable read, Connie... Congratulations on a great win!

Neva Romaine

Date: 10/20/2015 9:12:00 AM

Hey Connie, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the contest! A well deserved win. Be Blessed, Neva

Paul Callus

Date: 10/19/2015 3:29:00 PM

Congratulations on a deserved win, Connie. I remember reading this before; even then it served you well, since it was also a winner! Hugs // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/19/2015 5:07:00 AM

Congrats on ur sweet win Connie!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/19/2015 1:51:00 PM

Thank you much Dr. Sharma. XX Connie

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/18/2015 7:37:00 PM

So lovely, Connie!! And I love the format, and the use of the compound wind so cleverly ! Great piece it is !!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/19/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Carrie. That form was created by my friend Margaret Smith. It is challenging but really nice. Blessings, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/18/2015 3:46:00 PM

Connie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/19/2015 1:48:00 PM

I enjoyed your blog. Thank you for my placement in your contest! Blessings, Connie

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/29/2014 12:24:00 AM

This is just beautiful,congrats on the win Connie.

Faye Gibson

Date: 11/28/2014 10:04:00 AM

Connie, I love what you did in these words. Your imagery is just beautiful. Congratulations.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations Connie! This was surely one of the best in this contest, thus a deserved win...with the first stanza being my favourite. // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/27/2014 1:05:00 PM

Beautiful, Connie! Congrats and Happy Thanksgiving! Hugs, Rhonda

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/26/2014 11:40:00 AM

Hi Connie, You gave this poem a spectacular life, passion and energy. Very interesting. Nicely structured also. Congratulations on an excellent win. Happy Thanksgiving! Earl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/26/2014 6:01:00 AM

ohh how you glide and flow with this one, connie!.. love it.. thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your fine win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2014 11:50:00 PM

BIG congrats on the well deserved win, Connie. I am feeling so sad tonight. I forgot to enter my poem and it was the only one for earth.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/26/2014 2:36:00 AM

Oh how sad Andrea. I loved yours. Makes sense now that I didn't see it on the winners list.

Joseph May

Date: 11/25/2014 7:57:00 PM

Congrats on your win Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/25/2014 6:59:00 PM

I so enjoyed your use of alliteration & language (last one, 2nd line, too?) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/25/2014 5:59:00 PM

Hi Connie, stopping back to congratulate you on your 2nd place win! I knew from the beginning your poem would be on the podium! Hugs, Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/25/2014 5:14:00 PM

Great Job, you really brought poetic life to the wind. Congratulations on your win.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/25/2014 4:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Connie. Every individual stanza beautifully penned.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/25/2014 4:05:00 PM

I love these wind poems. Yours is wonderful. Congrats. BG

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 2:54:00 PM

Its a delight to read this again Connie - Many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/25/2014 8:45:00 AM

Excellent flow and imagery. Great expression in such a short piece in such a restricted form. Super 7 from me.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/24/2014 7:12:00 AM

Beautiful descriptions of why I love autumn. Nature is so vibrant and alive during this season.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/23/2014 10:37:00 PM

Hi Connie, I love the way you used your words to create the imagery of Autumn wind, and how wonderfully it all flows together. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/23/2014 4:12:00 PM

So beautiful!Fantastic!! sweet lady.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/23/2014 8:08:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine. It is my favorite season. Mahalo, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2014 12:48:00 AM

I love this form and how you used words so magically to convey the feeling and the fury of the wind. GREAT picture too, connie. It's all gorgeous. a SEVEN from me too.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/18/2014 1:47:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I love Margaret's form too. The compound words really add to the beauty of her form.