Autumn Whispers and Flails Her Arms

It’s raining leaves and acorns
Contrast of sound
Silent shapes and colors drifting
Meanwhile the nuts
Shelling my roof, my deck, the air

Autumn whispers and flails her arms
No doubt now she’s arrived
She’s arrived in brisk fashion today
She’s armed and dangerous
and beautiful and clamorous,
turning bold and cold
and amorous.

Why do I say amorous?

Married couples will move from the sides
of their bed, to cuddle-pretend, igniting
fires in the center of their universe…
falling…falling…falling
in love, not minding the other
breathing down their neck,
the oceanic snore,
cold feet.

Cold feet, you say?

The flirtation of feet
will create giggles, in fact.
Only makes the heart grow fonder
in this autumnal swaddle.

If you're too young to understand,
well *bless your heart—

Go take a flying leap
into a crunchy, harvested,
wholesome pile of down…

down you go
in your innocence
make it last

because raking lasts,
as well—

you’ll find out soon enough
about aches and pains—
falling…

10/16/2021

used to express fondness; or sympathy for someone,
oft said in a covert and condescending way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hind Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 4:48 PM
What a take on Autumn- really, I'm in awe
Krutsinger Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 10:58 AM
The flirtation of feet - love that part!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 10:46 PM
My wife showed great fondness for me. Still you write a lovely down to earth poem. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Theraven Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 10:40 PM
Kim, Your Autumn from a woman that knows.. Described it well, yes, so well. I would sooner kneel in defeat to your Autumn love with cold feet. Forever try and fail to describe..., a life found in joy absolute, and complete. Just so. -Richard
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Thank you for lovely words, Richard!
Poet Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 9:29 AM
down you go in your innocence make it last I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. Your imagery and metaphors shed more enchantment on this incredible artwork.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Thank you so much, Lasaad!
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