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Autumn Weeps

Summer hung her head in sorrow wondering about a new tomorrow over summer she began to lose leaves one by one they sauntered to the ground she called- they would not return she could not revive the lifeless leaf her dress no longer shades green for the dryness stripped her colors now looking forlorn and barren she had to welcome in fall she apologized for her undress as rain did not stop to visit fall will not have the grandeur to dress in her mutable shades making her very sad that day.

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Date: 1/25/2018 8:09:00 PM
Very nicely done, Phyllis. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 9/27/2017 5:03:00 PM
such wonderful personification Phyllis:-) I do adore the transition from summer to autumn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/5/2017 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Yes the fall is in full swing. Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Date: 9/16/2017 10:54:00 AM
a lovely imaginative write, my friend. I hope you are feeling much better by now x
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/17/2017 4:49:00 PM
Thanks Jack for your comment. Will have to drop you a quick note. Hope all is well with you and mum. love phyl
Date: 9/13/2017 4:30:00 PM
Very nice, Phyllis. Autumn is just beginning here. // Barry.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/17/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Barry. Yes fall is here and sure is a dry year for us. love phyl
Date: 9/12/2017 12:18:00 PM
Spring is gone, summer is past... Autumn is falling faster and fast. Very nice
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Date: 9/17/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. love phyl
Date: 9/12/2017 12:18:00 PM
Spring is gone, summer is past... Autumn is falling faster and fast. Very nice
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Date: 9/7/2017 4:30:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Phyllis ... with goodbye to summer - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/17/2017 4:47:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise. Yes goodbye to summer the leaves are changing so fast and we are so so dry this year. Lots of large cracks in the soil. Take care. love phyl
Date: 9/6/2017 5:11:00 PM
Wonderful words Phyllis, regards, Kevin x
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/17/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl

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