Autumn Treetops

Natural attire, 
Iridescent canopies;
A leaden wardrobe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wordslinger Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 9:57 AM
Good, good, good, Nice write. I love autumn myself
Martin Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Loved the last line, a wardrobe of leaves.
Yamin Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 1:22 AM
Raul, What a beautiful Haiku -presents a vivid picture of treetops with fresh shoots in autumn. I am sure you meant to write 'laden' in the third line. Thanks for congratulating me on my poem Defaulter making the semi finals. I am grateful. -Mohammad
Ahmad Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Beautiful~!
Bird Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 8:34 PM
I can see this so clearly, it all it's beauty, you do beautify the written word so well Raul.
Shango Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 7:25 PM
She dresses for you as well as you dress her ... keep on writing, friend.
Bellefleur Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 12:37 PM
So much is seen in these words - great imagery - thank you for your comments on my poem..
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May 3, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Creative images for a interesting perspective in this poem. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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