Autumn Sunset

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yellow evening beams pots of gold across the grass darkness in the east 7/10/18

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/11/2017 9:19:00 AM

Wow! Janis, simply outstanding:)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:20:00 PM

Thanks Jo. They keep raising the contest entries. Not too fair.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/11/2017 8:16:00 AM

I do love Autumn and this haiku magnifies it's beauty. Love the picture you paint, Janis:)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:20:00 PM

Thanks, Daniel.

Darren White

Date: 7/11/2017 2:17:00 AM

Love the pot of gold comparison, very strong :)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:21:00 PM

Thanks and blessings, Janis.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/10/2017 2:38:00 PM

Perfect with the picture, nice one Janice...

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:23:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie. Blessings, Janis.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2017 2:11:00 PM

- Beautifully written with the autumn's gold, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:24:00 PM

Appreciate your comments, Anne-Lise,