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"My favorite season is autumn, and I love walking through woods."- Lucy Davis

 

Autumn Stroll

Under the autumn sun's warm, golden ray,
In the early afternoon, we choose to stray, 
Trees adorned in green and gold, so bold, 
Leaves carpeting the earth in hues untold.

Hand in hand, through meadows bathed in gold, 
Our shadows dance, our love story unfolds, 
Wind whispers secrets, leaves upon you fall, 
Nature's jewelry adorns, you stand tall.

A bouquet of flowers, love's sweet debut, 
A token of my heart, offered to you, 
As you inhaled their fragrance, my heart flew, 
Your smile, my joy, forever true.

In our hand-in-hand stroll, leaves in our wake, 
Romantic words in whispers, love's sweet cake, 
Birds above us, eager for tales of love, 
Under the autumn sky, we're blessed from above.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 12:09 PM
My favorite lines: "A bouquet of flowers, love's sweet debut, A token of my heart, offered to you,..." Nicely done Jay - Congratulations! :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Jay, a beautiful poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 10:45 AM
Lovely Autumn love poem, Jay. Your exquisite imagery kept me in the moment as I read your poetry. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill
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September 5, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Jay this is absolute beautiful, ‘twas an awesome autumn stroll… Belle
Volumes Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 9:20 PM
Everything about Autumn sounds wonderful the way you composed your verse Jay. Well done.
Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Lovely stroll, Jay. Imagery so redolent of autumn. :) gw
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 3:33 PM
what wonderful autumnal imagery and I love the pic Jay :-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 1:07 PM
- Face the autumn, hand in hand ... lovely, Jay :) - hugs
Xiang Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 11:52 AM
You make the autumnal magical. I and others alike are blessed by your words. The one who holds your hand is even more blessed by your soliloquy.
Narain Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Triny for your compliments.
Meadows Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 10:25 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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