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Autumn Still-Life

Perching on a fencepost, the meadowlark calls in sweet trilling tones like a solo marimba. I mimic her voice and watch her curiosity as I stroll among the goldenrod and yarrow, the pathway winding through a welcoming maze of autumn wildflowers wanting to be noticed before the cold north wind nips their heads and turns golden brown their long-legged stems. The sweet scent of summer honeysuckle lingers though their bright orange blossoms are gone, but I still faintly hear the rapid fluttering wings of hummingbirds who overstayed their welcome, hurriedly fleeing before October’s chilly breath. Touching the raspy edges of a Queen Anne’s Lace, I pluck a stem or two for a neglected vase. My heart smiles contentedly. I long to see the meadow white with early snow.
Written December 9, 2022 Submitted to "Still-Life Autumn Scene" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper

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Date: 12/29/2022 5:47:00 PM
You now can smell the flowers of heaven and enjoy rest , and health, we shall miss you Milton
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Date: 12/29/2022 4:44:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing... You're now with the Lord as you along your faith and trust in Jesus Christ testify. You will continually be a mentor to me...
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Date: 12/29/2022 1:21:00 PM
You will be missed my friend!
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Date: 12/28/2022 10:04:00 PM
How I wish I had seen this to tell you how beautiful it was before you passed. Such a well deserved first placement. Congrats to the friend I miss and will fondly remember .
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:05:00 PM
I am always inspired by your works. This is one of a great works. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2022 5:45:00 PM
This is hard to post my friend. You will be heartfelt missed. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
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Date: 12/10/2022 9:04:00 AM
You take the reader on a wonderful autumn stroll Milton, love the imagery in your verse. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/10/2022 10:12:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. You, too.
Date: 12/10/2022 4:26:00 AM
"autumn wildflowers wanting to be noticed" - now I race to a dictionary tro look up marimba. I really want to see one! Thanks for the pretty poem!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/10/2022 8:28:00 AM
You're welcome, Caren. Thanks for the comment. You hear a lot of marimba in late-night jazz music. Soft and mellow.
Date: 12/9/2022 12:01:00 PM
This is quite well written.Good to see someone use adjective
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/9/2022 1:14:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem, David. I appreciate it.

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